After reading everything, there is a lot of good things and horse shit, but i will talk about what i think of the last 3 arc...the story was good, but since the arc of the movie its falling straight to hell, its get out of your control really fast, hell it was the worst thing that i had read in years, a kaioken x 100? Izuku body should have exploded after the 21, no gadget can protect you from something like that, is like Guy sensei from Naruto using the last gate or Luffy of One piece using 2nd gear for too much time before the time skip, thats how hardcore is the amount of presure the body get from that technique

The whole situation at the mountain training was good, heck i was expecting some flirt with Pixie for the sake of saiyans loving strong personality womens

Now, pulling a Namek situation using AFO? i give it to you that Killing All Might is a good catalyst for the transformation, but thats the only good thing storywise, everything else could had been better... dont know how your gonna continue this bt hopefully it will get better...

There are 5 questions i like ask?

One:Is deku get xeno goku gi or combine between saiyan Amor and gamma suit (in Canon)

Two:Since mei get ki. She make support items in matter of seconds or matter of minutes?

Three:are you make Melissa done full gauntlet?(please make two)Because if deku combine full gauntlets with his iron sole. Then he will make shoot style to use not only his legs but his arms at sometime. Is deku get it in provisional hero license exam arc or overhaul arc?

Four:Is piccolo or Deku's dad training class 1-a (except momo and uravity) how bring out ki inside them and combine their ki with their quirks?

Five:Can piccolo or Deku's dad help deku to turn into super saiyan or deku must figure out how go super saiyan and think of super saiyan has natural state?

Sorry mate, the way you write it so, inorganic. It fells weird, I don’t feel like I’m reading a story I feel like I’m reading and article or essay. Regardless of my opinion I want to give you some constructive criticism, when writing as the narrator don’t use present tense it doesn’t sound appealing to the reader, you don’t use context for some reason and due to that you keep reinstated some facts that just feel extra. Also your protagonist, your Izuku is completely different from the one in the show yet you still force some of Izuku’s events of the show into your fic when they have nothing to do with your protagonist.

Ok, you can’t pull shit like coping stuff from the show when it clearly contrast with your character, so last chapter he was flirting with mono out of the blue like the chad you describe him to be, on this chapter his blushing, falling, mumbling and stuttering like a retard because you wanted to follow events from the show, then the motherfucker goes back to chad mode, you mention his prideful like a Sayan, but then apologizes for everything, you mention he’s shy with girls but he carry mono like a fucking Disney princes all over the city while pretty much flirting.

I think him having one for all plus Sayan shit on him is extremely over killed, it’s like giving steroids to brolly, just unnecessary.

YES! REVENGE!

GODDAMN IT! BAKUGO DOESN'T DESERVE TO WIN!

Oh! And are you make hisashi or Piccolo (if he still live) are one who training class 1-a and class 1-b how use ki and combine with their quirks?

In next chapter. Can you make deku use "his" black whip as way that luffy did in gear 4. And i hope you didn't had Coronavirus.

Dead fanfic

Momo wouldn't say "handsome hunk" lol

Is Grand Torino, Yoda

I'm afraid you've completely lost me here. Kendo is a skilled martial artist with hero training, she doesn't need saving from three random drunk-ass back-alley goons. Not to mention the whole "I saved a girl from being raped, she's totally gonna join my harem now" thing that's obviously being set up. And finally, Izuku's quirk is an enhancement quirk, so no matter what he says, acting above the speed of a normal human will be taken as an obvious use of his quirk.

Why isn't this a crossover?

The storm master 567 there are 4 things i will like comment?

One:deku will mercy all for one and fly away,all for one tried kill deku but instead deku kill all for one. Just like goku kill Frieza in Namek Saga.

Two:i agree that both Bakugo and shoto get ki to keep up izuku. But i think class 1-a (except momo and uravity) get ki for fight strong villains.

Three: i am 100% agree that mirio get ki and become powerhouse. But in chapter 30 ragdoll get her quirk back from all for one because Dragon balls.

So in future deku will use Dragon balls bring mirio quirk back or use eri stockpile after physical connect adapt that energy to make his own to bring mirio quirk back.

So if mirio combine his quirk and ki then he is really a true powerhouse.

Four:in three years after fight beerus (i get this feeling that beerus appear and deku become super saiyan god in endeavor agency arc) whis training not only deku but class 1-a and class 1-b know better about ki and they also known god ki as well.

Deku will get super saiyan blue and increase percentage of pride for all after graduate in u a high.

I think shigaraki will training hard to Revenge for his master and will be gold frieza level in resurrection of f After his quirk awakening.

But if he get all for one quirk, bodily modification and ki shigaraki will be jiren level.

So deku unlock super saiyan blue evolution against gigantomachia or re destro or both of them.

This is point that deku not only mastered pride for all but goes ultra instinct Against shigaraki! (Check manga in my hero academia war arc)