Reviews for Systema
Gizmo Gear chapter 81 . 2h
Hah! Aaaaand now he needs more clothing, though not for him, this time. XD

I have a feeling that this "kidnapping" will not quite go to plan.
NuclearLep chapter 81 . 6h
I think it’s funny how his cha stat is so high but he’s still such a dweeb lol
paradox0.5white chapter 81 . 16h
Summon humanoi-fication, donno if that is even a word, route ha. Maybe Jaune will also get summon union/ultimate/awakened form? Can't wait for the kidnappin- i mean next chapter
Guest chapter 72 . 16h
"JoJo, I found the haged man, don't worry, the Arc boy has him"

"That's goo-Wait what!?"

"Yeah, I know, I just hope he won't kill him"
razmire chapter 81 . 23h
Something tells me that Jaune is going to get all sorts of crap for (unknowingly) turning Electrus into a girl, especially if she refers to him as ‘Master’ around others.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Harbinger of Mayhem chapter 81 . 7/20
OOOOOOOH! Humanoid summons! There is soo much potential for shenanigans
Guest chapter 81 . 7/20
"she" I've been waiting for this, haha. :D
"Why is there a naked yellow woman following you Jaune?"
Chainthatbinds chapter 81 . 7/20
(clap)(clap)(clap)(clap)(clap)(clap)
have a feeling I know what bound sentient is about. but also brings up some questions and answers as to the fact that it's the alternative to bound beasts.
Kalbario chapter 81 . 7/20
There should be a perk called "The Creator" or "The Maker" or "Life Giver" or just plain "Dad/Mom", because I did NOT expect that! It would be Hilarious!
Have you kept track of all the unfinished quest Jaune has? It's kinda hard to remember.

Congrats on getting to chapter 81! And at half a MILLION words at that too!

Getting back to that last shocking scene, does that make Jaune a Daddy now? Technically speaking, Jaune DID bring Electrus to life FIRST and now made her into a semi-Deity/Demi-Human. So kinda speaking, She is his first daughter? Will all the other elementals eventually end up as Female too? Y'know, with Jaune having seven sisters and all while being the only male child in a family of ten.
Sum9 chapter 81 . 7/20
Well damn. Now his charisma is something worth a damn! Impressive.

Also gratz on figuring out and both reworking and updating your Enchanting tree to Ritual Casting. Gotta wonder how powerful Electrus is now that THAT has happened. :3 Though I really wasn't expecting that considering you had Seiren's soul just waiting to be used. I cannot fault Jaune's sentimentality. It was logical, and plus lightning is probably the greatest of the elements for combat.

On the other hand boo, I want my Angel Seiren J:

I'll just have to be patient I guess.
Lord of Fleas chapter 81 . 7/20
Hooray! More chapters! Thanks for the update, you beautiful whale you!
RavenousMind chapter 81 . 7/20
Hey nice to see another chapter, and the fact it's a pretty good one don't lessen the happiness I fell when I saw the notification.
It's super interesting that you summon and evolved his "familiarI don't want to write summon summon), and I think that there is so much possibilities with these elemental, I mean you could use theme for crafting, like creating artefact, enhance other's weapon by infusing theme with soul orbe and elemental power, exemple for penny imfise her with metal elemental and earth elemental power so she have an (slow and week or not) regeneration of her metal body, in a way he well be able to boost his friend and ally.
Or he could create something that Weiss could wield who can make illusion or mirage for her pseudo kidnapping and death (using, I. Don't know, fire, ice, water, wind elemental to create a mist capable of making mirage, in the same way it could change her appearance making her free to travel without fear of being recognized.
I'm just suggesting, you can do whatever you want with it, after all you already have done a truly good job with your story, and don't hesitate to pm me if something cauth your interest and you want to discuss it, be that for your current story or a future one, it's always good to have people who understand your frénésie of writers .
So again good job and thanks for the chapter and for reading my monologue
jedimasterb10 chapter 81 . 7/20
Okay, I'll take this section-by-section:

1. Ilia took that remark exceptionally well.
2. Why do I hear Jaune talking to Jacques in a sleazy, fake-British accent? Must be the five CHA points. Also, yay for poker puns!
3. If there's one thing I learned from BlazBlue and Guilty Gear, it's that the more belts you're wearing, the stronger you are. And talk about a lengthy to-do list.
4. Okay, after reading that Ritual of Communion description, since when did Jaune become the Avatar? Also, one...two...three...four...five new skills, and some epic new looks for his Elementals, too.

Talk about STACKED.
Uday Sra chapter 81 . 7/20
Awesome
legitreader123 chapter 21 . 7/20
Such subtle foreshadowing
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