Ok that was fucking amazing I am definitely staying for more

Is english your second language or something? 'Cuz Jesus Christ dude. There are so many grammatical errors and your sentence structure is so fragmented that it's physically painful to try and read this.

Yang is the fight, cause she loved the is to tight his so called wrongs, cause he feels responsible for anything and everything that goes wrong. Ren would be revenge against the Grimm.

Ok so why does Jaune have both Ra AND Apollo? Also, out of all the storm/sky gods you chose Zeus? ZEUS?! The SHAPESHIFTING RAPIST! Also, he’s from the same pantheon as Apollo, BUT HES A RAPIST! He’s one of the WORST influences you could have connected to Jaune! You could have chosen Thor, Susano’o, heck even Jupiter! Don’t get me wrong I’m really interested in this story, but I absolutely HATE Zeus. He’s the “lord of justice”, but there’s nothing just about him!

Prismatic knight? quite the crack ship there.
Curious.

loki also has a hundred leg horse

Nicely done chapter I like it

I have to say this so it’s going to bug me first love this so far doing a great job second Apollo’s sexual appetite was actually worse than Zeus and for God recommendation try Tyr Norse god of War, Law, and Justice and arguably one of the most selfless gods I’ve read about

May I suggest that Jaune becomes the host to the Norse Goddess Hel? Or the Egyptian God Anubis? Or even Thor? Why not the Babylonian God of Chaos Tiamat?

How's this for a God Power?
Heimdallr: The ability of foresight but it is limited to Jaune's own actions.
E.g Whether or not Jaune should tear Cardin a new one for bullying Velvet
1: Jaune physically beats down and humiliates Cardin which leads to both getting reprimanded by Goodwitch.
2: Jaune removes Velvet from Cardin's grasp followed by Cardin then mocking Jaune which leads to a verbal beatdown (by Jaune) which in turn leads to Cardin: getting physical, getting stopped by Goodwitch; and receiving an even worse punishment than if Jaune chose to swoop down to Cardin's level.

noice.

Will Ilia be part of the harem?

the omake was cool but there is one VERY BIG thing that has to change. Illia wouldn't be blushing cuz of jaune. like dude she's lesbian, this story is cool and I'm all for making changes in a story but that's not cool at all. seriously man you gotta change that.

I liked the Omake!

That was a interesting chapter