Reviews for The Inevitability of Oversight
stars90 chapter 18 . 1h
I don't know what your previous attempts at this chapter looked like, but the finished product came out pretty darned well. I love your explorations on the philosophy of good, evil, and forgiveness
Opalalchemy chapter 18 . 2h
This chapter gave me too many feels. I feel like I was the one in therapy. Kudos!
WarManAndrew chapter 18 . 4h
I will DEFINITELY join the discord. Also thank you for this chapter, what I like so much about your writing is that even though it's a Star Wars story the truth of what you're saying is true and applies to real life. Hope to see the next chapter soon. (Though I can wait if time is what you need to make it this good :) ).
ShadowLDrago chapter 18 . 4h
Well, I'm always glad to see Anakin making more progress and Palpatine getting screwed over, even if it's in tiny ways.
TharAmira chapter 18 . 5h
Update! Yay!

In response to your author's note- yes this was indeed a monster of a chapter.

I know some people prefer the 'action' parts of the story and get a little bored with the 'psychology' parts, but I loved this chapter. I also love that it's one long, uninterrupted segment of the mind-healing session. That, and this chapter's session addressed (or at least brought up) many of the issues I was (somewhat impatiently) waiting to see addressed.

Basically, I love this chapter, I love this story, and I love you for writing it.
DebatorMax chapter 18 . 5h
Taking your time on this was worth it and it was absolutely amazing! Please keep it up I need something to read Star Wars related. Also can you please incorporate the young longs in the Ashoka trandsohan arc of the clone wars. They later rescued Ashoka from hondo if that helps you remember.
Scrumblenut chapter 18 . 5h
Interesting. I need to stop beginning my reviews with that word. Having a full mind healing session like this, slowly working through Anakin’s pain and self hatred was needed for the poor time traveller. I look forward to them out manipulating palpy mcscrotum face. Take care, and I’ll join the discord next weekend.
Dragon lord Syed 101 chapter 18 . 5h
Good chapter interesting to see one of Anakin's sessions
Revliledpembroke chapter 18 . 5h
No, no, no. This is the Internet. We don't do things like "nice, fun communities." No fun, only hate. Look at Twitter.

I kid, of course.
RhysThornbery chapter 18 . 6h
Great chapter, as always. Really enjoyed it. I look forward to more whenever you get the chance. Thanks for sharing it with us!
AustenLux chapter 3 . 7/25
Okay holy cow! I just wanted to tell you that I cried reading that vision! That was beautifully done.
cameron1812 chapter 17 . 7/14
omg this. Love, love the angles being developed hereFantastic rumination from Master Voss, that little hint of foreshadowing, Siri, revenge, oh. So many little tantalizing gems in one chapterThank you! And sure, Discord would be fun, but ask yourselfdo you really want another platform to have to monitor?Just saying. I think I am on 20, and ugh...
Theia Darkmoon chapter 16 . 7/10
Four words:
Baby. Ahsoka. Is. ADORABLE!
Blargha chapter 17 . 7/6
A NEW CHAPTER YAY! Gotta say, I love Siri. She's pretty great :D And I'm excited to see Quinlan and Anakin together XD

I am equally bad at discording, though I wouldn't be opposed to joining another one :D
MangoSunbeams chapter 17 . 7/6
Lovely as always! Sorry about the contestI'm so excited for the plots and plans! Hope you're doing well and thanks for writing
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