Reviews for Kaguya's Jinchuriki
Landon Turoski chapter 3 . 5/26
Please update
KonekoBlack chapter 3 . 5/8
are you going to make a new chapter
blackbullet7 chapter 3 . 4/21
extremely good story, hope to see more of this in the future and to see Naruto torture the entirety of konoha excluding the innocent
ethan.lukkar chapter 3 . 3/17
Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon
1529 chapter 3 . 1/24
Pretty decent, but the 'revealed memories' but is more annoying than anything and very unrealistic.

I would assume that there are one or two 'rape memoriesany more than that would be pretty hard to fathom) and most of Naruto's life was spent in other ways without these memories affecting him at all... this means his sudden aversion to touch is ridiculous. I'm not denying that the memories would be horrific (and definitely not that a real experience such as that would mentally scar the individual who experienced it), but somehow these revealed memories have now completely overcome nearly two DECADES of memories that had no connection with these few and these couple of memories haven't affected the rest of his life, interactions with others or his own memories until just now.

I've seen this mechanic used before and, despite it not making much sense given the background of the situation in Konoha, in this case it seems as if the author liked the idea, but was too lazy to actually create a backstory... so, suddenly revealed memories it is.

This story wood be much better with a more thought out plot and a more believably traumatized protagonist instead of this Chia-pet version.
Onishin Tsukitenshi chapter 3 . 1/21
Great... another story that keeps Raynare and gets rid of Kalawarner, Dohnaseek, and Mittelt off-scene solely for the sake of adding another big-breasted girl to the harem.
Biblio388 chapter 3 . 12/26/2019
Very cool. Interesting idea with the new girl. Should be fun to see what trouble she brings.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/12/2019
I definitely wanna read more of this!
LordOfWinter001 chapter 2 . 12/8/2019
Not going to lie, it's kinda weird how you made Naruto some traumatized rape victim. Like why dude? I feel like it totally ruins the flow of your story and it's pretty lame to read.
alphaprince0 chapter 1 . 11/24/2019
please continue this
Dracaris5470 chapter 1 . 11/13/2019
you ovetdone it quite a bit with the sealed memory part
Zack Lynch chapter 3 . 11/11/2019
This is a really good story, hope it updates soon!
Abbadon44 chapter 3 . 10/27/2019
Great story! Offer romantic progression each chapter, but uses the trauma to help keep it a little slow.
rakfnan45 chapter 3 . 10/23/2019
This story is awesome.
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 3 . 10/18/2019
Man! When are you going to update this awesome story again! Please update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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