Reviews for The Paladin's Game (Rewriting)
RunOnSentences chapter 6 . 8/3
Bro huh? How the fuck did he get here, did I miss something in the last chapter? Where tf did junior come into play?
RunOnSentences chapter 3 . 8/3
Great, jaunes a fucking moron
DragonTetho chapter 18 . 6/22
I hope you continue updating this.
Kevy The Chevy chapter 18 . 6/21
all I have to say to this story is that if Jaune doesn't multiclass into rouge and yells "NOBODY EXPECTS THE JAUNE ARC INQUISITION!" before stealth attacking a murder of Grimm I'm going to be moderately disappointed. Disappointment also extends to if there is no Roll to Seduce final boss moment.

honestly enjoying this much more than other Gamer!Jaune fics because it feels like this is more focused on character interactions than grinding or skill experimenting with a DM that constantly sasses the player and gets miffed when the player tries to be clever, but is actually doing something idiotic.

As longs as you keep the heart of the story less on the System and more Jaune doing dumb things and telling the DM "I may be an idiot but I'm not stupid," this is getting like 3 favorites from me.
TheDragon2000 chapter 18 . 6/8
Good story overall but painful cliffhanger at the end :/ Thanks for sharing!
gogo bananas chapter 18 . 6/1
tbh this story is ok. make it a lil darker and it hits 10/10. rn it's a 6
gogo bananas chapter 7 . 6/1
oh no hes one of those goody fucks. definitely ruined his character
AfterShock112 chapter 5 . 5/23
original story was great, loving the re-writes, hope there's plans to update soon
Goken son of Summer chapter 2 . 5/8
the brothers gave him that skill I guess?
Goken son of Summer chapter 2 . 5/8
:Lol Cardin Winchester is "special" indeed
Gilgamesh50 chapter 8 . 5/3
So far i love it there is still 10 chapters for me to read but i hope he doesnt reveal his gamer ability and phyrraxjaune
in the show she didnt deserve to die
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20
His luck should only be 25 percent less because of Aura
Bullemor93 chapter 5 . 4/3
Hey not to be picky and it may be because you may be updating chapters but at the end of this jaune is level 22 and in the next chap he fights a level 24 beowulf and you say its 10 levels above him. also at the end of ch 6 he is level 18. If you are just updating sorry about this just started this story.
bartek5552 chapter 18 . 3/29
It's amazing story I can't wait for another chapter and I hope you wll more often release them
tristanwaltz1 chapter 1 . 3/3
More please please!
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