Reviews for Firsts |
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Sapoman chapter 2 . 11/14/2019 Man, this is the definition of wholesome fluff. If you find the inspiration to, please continue! |
Torrasque666 chapter 2 . 1/10/2019 This is fucking adorable. I do hope you continue. |
Langas chapter 2 . 10/25/2018 Pyrrha is MVP. Great story |
Asomatous chapter 2 . 9/18/2018 Pyrrha is, at least in this universe, the absolute paradigm of all things good and right in the world. If the brocode were the US Constitution, then Neptune and Jaune are members of the judicial branch, debating on how to interpret every rule. |
Hecseferblade chapter 2 . 8/9/2018 This is really adorable, I love the pacing so far. Hope you keep going at it, I’d love to see what trials you put them through and how much closer they get |
Vanishing Trooper chapter 2 . 8/5/2018 I really hope Pyrrha finds happiness here. She deserves it for being best wingman. |
Rapticon sr. the Goldenhearted chapter 1 . 8/5/2018 That was sweet a slow burn White Knight is a treat in my eyes. Also I am glad that you didnt go and villify Neptune that is common in most stories. I mean i admit Im not a fan of the pairing Neptune/Weiss but i dont hate the guy. If anything like Sun they are total bros when it comes down to it. |
Vanishing Trooper chapter 1 . 7/27/2018 This reminds me a lot of God Emperor Penguin's Inch. I like it. |
MalasLaBro chapter 1 . 7/26/2018 This is nice, a nice sweet piece to just brighten the day. WhiteKnight is nice. No complaints except for the amount of chapters. Good luck and Thank you. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2018 First nutt |
Caboose.RvB343 chapter 1 . 7/22/2018 Keep Keep goin! Keep goin!goin! Keep goin! |
Bloodline Purger chapter 1 . 7/22/2018 I enjoyed it quite alot. cant wait to see what else you come yp with or atleast what you come up with next. first time at the arcade maybe? |
michaeltop10 chapter 1 . 7/22/2018 I loved every second reading this. Without a doubt, this is definitely one of my favourite Whiteknight stories. |
Mad Library Scientist chapter 1 . 7/21/2018 Well, as far as possible prompts go (in no particular chronological order; ratings may vary): First kiss on cheek First kiss on lips First dance together (to make up for the one they never had at the Beacon dance?) First time seeing the other naked (accidentally? Seems like that would happen to Jaune, though it'd be funny if Weiss walked in on a naked Jaune and got super flustered) First time having sex First child First time sleeping together (the innocent kind; like falling asleep on a couch or something) First fight First time Meeting the Parents First time Meeting the Sibling (or siblings in Jaune's case) First trip to the beach (or, they get flustered putting sunblock on each other) I'm sure I can think of a lot more, but that's all that I got at the moment. Give me 5 minutes, and I'd probably have thought of another first for them |