You rock keep up the good work love your story hahaha

Try some grammar check sites. They provide better explaination than Microsoft.

Cant wait for more chapters

lol, best reply to something i've seen in a while.

First off, don’t be snarky with your readers, that pisses them off. Second, like I said before your grammar matters greatly so suck it up and get a beta reader

Another great chapter. Your grammar could use some SERIOUS work though but if English isn’t your main language I understand. But you still need a beta reader though, you have a nice story but your grammar would throw a LOT of people off. I was almost one of them till I gave it fic a chance.

yay already ko-ed the ginger prick

We're . It's okay. 'side I love Persona as well.

good story but for the love of god get grammarly or something

Finally! A fanfic that has Jaune with a gravity semblance! I started to like Gravity more after the Overwatch Origin Story for Sigma was released and am looking forward to see a fanfic that has Jaune with Sigma's Gravity power. But please, don't let those haters get you down, this is a really good story and I don't care if something isn't scientifically correct, it's fucking fiction why do people expect it to abide to our worlds physics?

Neat story so far.

Excellent update

How is German even a thing in a world where everyone speaks the same language and Germany never existed?

Make a Jaune x Yandere Ruby fanfic

I've read the comments and I don't want any part of this fic, I mean for one your all having a go at each other over Jaune getting motion sick for fuck sake, which he clearly doesn't have and yes he got sick the first time we saw him, but he's been in bullheads loads of time since then and we didn't see him get sick once since then, like just this season in Atlas, if he really did have motion sickness than why didn't he get sick those times you dumb fucks, your wiki doesn't mean shit if they don't show it on the show.