Reviews for Fairy Fire, A Fairy Tail Redo |
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![]() ![]() I've got a suggestion have Wendy Lucy and Adrian get a dual element state Adrian being sky light god slayer sky given to him by Wendy Wendy being water sky dragon slayer the water from juvia Lucy being dark fire devil slayer she gets the darkness from Mirajane who has used darkness when transformed |
![]() ![]() I don't remembers if god slayers had a god force reveal yet but I have a idea when they enter it have them transform like the 8 characters in warriors orochi 4 who can deify basically take in the powers of gods for a short amount of time if you need to see it there should be done deification videos on YouTube |
![]() ![]() For a future major antagonist how about a god that's basically like zamasu from dbs and wants to kill all mortals and looks down on other races as inferior and it takes all god slayers teaming up to take him down |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I am thinking of adding Ruby Rose as a Dark God Slayer in the story. If you have read any of my other works, you'll understand Ruby from RWBY is one of my favorite characters. Maybe even a new fanfic of a Dark Light Dragon God Slayer featuring Ruby. I don't know. Please let me know what you think." -Dn'nome Yes please! Twilight Dragon slayer Ruby Rose please! |
![]() ![]() So I absolutely love this story and I have a idea for a future arc have the requiem arrow from JoJo golden wind make an appearance but have it work for the story and world of fairy tail example it could be created by zeref in the hope it'll give someone a ability to kill him and it's Adrian who gets it and he gets the requiem ability of a god slayer |
![]() ![]() Considering what happened at the end here I'm hoping there's a point where Wendy goes completely berserk on a future enemy and it's essentially a one sided beatdown |
![]() ![]() What Lucy did to sol was that in reference to jotaros beatdown on Kira in diamond is unbreakable because he literally says the exact same thing Lucy said |
![]() ![]() Can I say I would call demon slayers equivalent to dragon force devil trigger but that's the DMC fan in me also I'm hoping we get a point later where someone pulls a TFS Vegeta and go mine mine mine mine mine and sneak attack |
![]() ![]() With the edolas versions of Adrian and Wendy have them be in a on again off again relationship with others telling them to make up there mind |
![]() ![]() Can I say I'm hoping for a point later where all the slayers jump and land looking like complete badasses then immediately collapse because they landed on a vehicle |
![]() ![]() Can I suggest a original story arc about Adrian and Wendy doing a job |
![]() ![]() I'm hoping to see Wendy get motion sick earlier then canon because it's always hilarious seeing dragon slayers get motion sick when they're trying to look badass and I can see a point where they get told they need to take the train and Adrian is holding Wendy who's trying to run also I kind of want Adrian and Wendy to live out the seven years it'll be interesting and could have some fun original arcs like the first couple of grand magic games before canon and for something interesting have sherria(sky god slayer) get a huge crush on Adrian much to Wendy's annoyance |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how Cynthia just shot Ichiya, assuming he was the real thing XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm~! What happens in Magnolia, stays in Magnolia. Very good chapter, and very good lemon. Writing these can change a person as they find their writing skills have been utilized in such an imaginative way, than again, they also take time to write. Really, not bad for your first written lemon. Anyhow, looking forward to future chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, I love the lemon. |