you've done an amazing job with this story this chapter has me super hyped up I cannot wait to see where you go with this keep up the amazing work

BWAHAHAHA! THE BOUNT'S ARE SOO FUCKED! XD

on another note I'm curious I found the source image for the cover of art of this story and the full one has all four members of RWBY with Hallow masks so ... are you going make WBY Vizard's?

I don’t want to be rude or anything, but an update of Silver Legacy feels overdue.

this might be something random but the way how you describe ruby's Arrancar form i cant but help to think that its a mix of -grimm ruby- fanart and -rwby 3.0- fanarts with a wolf motif added to the mix.

Why is it that only these few mistakes get me to review?

Nothing wrong with the fic so far, I'm stretching my suspension of disbelief enough to be a-okay with it, but it always comes crashing down when I find something I *know* to be badly Google translated.

Kakushifokkusu. Or, when translated, something around the lines of "hiding fox"... Except that it's wrong, or at least the latter half.

Fokkusu is not the translation of fox. Kitsune is the proper translation so the name hiding fox becomes Kakushikitsune.

Even the other one, Mazarozu, sounds right at first, but then you realize it's just Mother Rose in the way a Japanese person would say it in Engrish. Unfortunately, while Mother is easy to translate (literally translated as 'Hahait's a lot harder to translate rose into a Japanese word because they don't have a specific name for it, but 'Bara' is the closest.

Added together, it would be Hahabara as Mother Rose, or Barahaha as Rose Mother. You could even forego Haha and use Oya for Parent as another option.

I do like the concept and I can ignore the few grammar errors (I usually do), but not bad Google translate. It's one of the things I hate most and needed to say it. I just had to put that peeve out there, and if you want to fix it just use the replace command (CtrlH iirc). Or not, your story, but it really threw me out of the experience.

good chapter as always

I see Rens bankai being something that makes him completely disappear so let's put it in a battle sense

ren: Bankai *he then disappeared like he dissolved. Next thing I knew I had been cut on my side I tried to jump only to find myself on the floor with his sword to my throat

the downside to it is it doesn't mask sound made by Ren so say someone like Blake or Ruby were to fight him they'd be able to hear him moving and track his movement

Welp, the Bounts are F*CKED! Nora's gonna stab some hearts and Eat Pancakes, and she's all out of Pancakes at the moment.

(͝סּ ͜ʖ͡סּ) not bad

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Awesome work! Loved it! Looks like Nora is fully charged and ready for action! Time to go wild on some vampire wannabes! Lol.

Also, I’m confused. Doesn’t Ren already have a Bankai? You also gave it a name as well if I recall correctly.

Ren's bankai could be like an extension of his semblance or something, so it can heighten the emotions of anyone in a certain radius to a rediculous extent. I mean like rage so hot you can not think a single thought, or sadness to deep you will drown in your own tears.

this was fast damn

nice Ruby's Reaction to shirtless Ichigo is Hilarious especially the rapid ear twitching that was a nice touch. XD

NIIICE! This was AWESOME!

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