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Be sure to let me know by p.m. if you need someone two beta -Also with this you could blame me if people complain about the English

please make more chapters

please make more chapters

I think theres a problem going on with the first chapter cause for some reason and i don't know if others see it but the whole first chapter has extra text that really don't fit in as it seems to look like someone was trying to type in some code or something. And this was before I got the notification that this story was updated. So I don't know if anyone else sees it but it needs to be fixed.

Leona makes fun of his name which is Japaneses but doesn't understand Chan then she should not be able to make the reference from Naruto to Fishcake

This is very confusing.

Is Sasuke still alive, why is Naruto so “beat up” over his newly discovered relation to Sasuke!?

this is good still a lot of missing words in this story not to bad but I cant wait for more

Thanks

Nice chapter can Naruto's weapon be either rebellion and reapers twin shotguns

To other guest

Obito's MS started to bleed after killing the blood mist ninja, Madara eye started to bleed when he got revived and took one of his rinnegan back... soooooo you're wrong. Also kakashi would bleed from his MS too.

To other guest

Obito's MS started to bleed after killing the blood mist ninja, Madara eye started to bleed when he got revived and took one of his rinnegan back... soooooo you're wrong. Also kakashi would bleed from his MS too.

To that guest below that said Jaune is a worthless character, go fucking kill yourself you worthless shit.

What “hitai-ate plothole“!?