Reviews for desert blessing
reality deviant chapter 4 . 10/17/2019
This desert raised/desert born series is awesome!
mountainelements chapter 4 . 9/24/2019
Keith with family is always great. Keith with Pidge as his family is even better. Thanks for the update!
Frie-Ice chapter 4 . 9/23/2019
I wonder if the end chapter here would be through Lance or Hunk's POV?
Guest chapter 3 . 5/3/2019
Well, if it helps any, Allura, two of the few close family members Keith has left are also Paladins, and therefore right along side him in this fight. Mama Holt is back on Earth, relatively safe for now, Sam and Matt are being searched for - most fervently by Pidge, with Keith and Shiro helping, and his mother is apart of the rebel movement you were wondering about and probably going to end up assigned to be an in-castle liaison once they meet properly, if only because her son looks too much like her to risk her going undercover anymore. XD So there aren't a lot of avenues to pull him away from loyalty to Voltron unless something goes i/really/i wrong.

(Also, so delighted to see fierce little sister Pidge stepping up from the start. Been awhile since I stopped in to follow the progress of some of my favorite stories here, so I never got to see if that would actually happen though I rather expected it with their familial bond and her tiny ball of fierceness. And calm papa-Shiro Making A Point. 3 )
mountainelements chapter 3 . 4/25/2019
I like the addition of how the Galra who killed Allura's mother was claiming to be against Zarkon. While it gives more reason for Allura not trusting Keith, it still feels repulsive how she was thinking that she could find some use for him, but he couldn't be a paladin. I'm trying to be sympathetic towards Allura, but the way she keeps judging Keith based on his skin color/genetics really feels like racism.

The scene with Alfor's AI talking Allura around is great! I love that there were some Galra that sided with Altea and that their children probably started the Blades of Mamora. The conversation between Allura and Keith went pretty well. I'm still hoping for Allura to find out about Honerva as soon as possible though.

Thanks for posting this!
Frie-Ice chapter 3 . 4/25/2019
I really like part of the possible origin story to the BoM you added to your Desert series. I know that you might have another Allura POV of this series planned, but you were to do POV of the other characters, like you had done in abyss of memory, who would they be? Sendek, when he learned that the Red Paladin is a half-Galra and gets the Empire to look into Krolia, or Kolivan, from when he learned about Keith from Ulaz? (Guesses, not requests.)
MaraDixen413 chapter 2 . 10/5/2018
Tears. Just tears. My beautiful boy.
unavailable.101.goodbye chapter 2 . 9/24/2018
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

SO CUTE I love my bbys :')

hope you had a good vaca! I'm gonna be honest, I was kind of bored without your updates lol
Frie-Ice chapter 2 . 9/24/2018
I love how this chapter ended, and I can't wait to read your upcoming Desert Raised, as it might tell of desert Keith's events of how he saved Shiro from the G.G., as well as the other fic you have planned.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/23/2018
So glad your back from vacation. I hope it was great. A week without you was tough!
mountainelements chapter 2 . 9/23/2018
I'm guessing that Shiro remembered about Ulaz earlier so Allura didn't get captured while trying to get information. Other than that, Krolia losing her post, and Ulaz NOT invading the castle, I'm not sure what other changes from canon occurred, if any.

I found amusing the scene where Kolivan is asking Krolia if she left anything out of her report. It's sad that Krolia will never see Heath again, but at least she meets up with Keith earlier in this AU. Thanks for the update!
WyldClaw chapter 1 . 9/5/2018
that was incredible
BeccaBookworm chapter 1 . 9/5/2018
Oh my gosh this is so sad but beautiful!
unavailable.101.goodbye chapter 1 . 9/5/2018
Oh apparently my comp glitched and I wasnt actually logged in

the guest below is actually me :O
Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2018
Heath is the best dad and no one can convince me otherwise (because what guy would be so great that he accepts the responsibility of raising his (half-alien) son alone without complaint?!) Honestly love him so much and he at least deserves a canon name.

Krolia being so chill while Heath internally freaks out XD they're so adorable. I love how you write their interactions, they're so soft. Not to mention Keith and Heath just- just oof so pure

I love this family haha
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