Reviews for Return of Valyria
Ptolemys pyjamas chapter 8 . 9/1
I love this story. It's great how despite their posturing and strong showing there's absolutely nothing they can actually do or even think of doing. Well written indeed.
Kaiser Chris chapter 12 . 5/18
Really great story! Looking forward to more!
derderxp2 chapter 12 . 5/1
Wish there's more :(
Ulv01 chapter 12 . 3/26
Please can you update the story soon. It’s one of the best stories I have read.
Ulv01 chapter 12 . 11/7/2019
This story is amazing and I really love it. I wonder when Jaenera travels north to get darksister back will she found out about Jon and after she founds out about what Catelyn has done to Jon. Jaenera can order that Jon will be the heir to the north. So catlyns feer will became tru and it is only her fault and she must live with it. Becouse that is far worse for Catelyn than to die by dragon flame.

Sorry about my english its not my first language.
Bella-swan11 chapter 12 . 11/2/2019
Oberyn you know that the time of the house Baratheon and Lannister are counted because the wrath of Jaenera Targaryen will be something terrible, let alone of all the houses that supported Robert Baratheon's rebellion their futures can be somewhat dark. It is best that Arianne marry Garlan Tyrell it is better to ally with that kingdom, until the dragon lords arrive at Westeros, although it will be better to warn your daughter Sarella to leave the Citadel it is certain that the dragon lords are going to burn him for cause the extinction of the dragons of the Targaryen house. Ned you know that the future of the Stark house is going to depend on Jon, you are sure that the rumors are true and if you want to save your children it is time that Jon learns that reality was never a bastard who is a Prince Targaryen; you need to take him to meet his uncle Aemon on the wall to prepare him to be a dragon and let him be a wolf. Only Aemon can help the dragon lords have mercy on your kingdom, for that Jon must stop being a bastard because if Jaenera Targaryen finds out how her anger grew it will be something terrible; Only Aemon and Jon can intercede for you. But one thing you can be sure Ned is that your wife will not be able to escape her punishment, Jaenera will not forgive that her nephew's grandson has been humiliated as a bastard by your wife and your servants; it is certain that Viserys, Daenerys and Aegon are not going to feel mercy to see how Jon grew up as a bastard.
ReadLikeHermione chapter 12 . 11/2/2019
Great chapter
Jojo of Faraway chapter 12 . 11/1/2019
Yes, a new chapter. I really have grown to like Jae as a protagonist and like that we see more of Dany and Viserys as well. I am curious to see how the meeting will eventually look between Jae and her family's descendants.
Guest chapter 12 . 10/31/2019
I always wanted armies of their chimeras wyvern/dragon/wolf/cat/avian/scorpion/fauna/crusta/floramen and wood(straw/leather scarecrow)/stone(gems)/magma valyrian steel golems with swords tridents and shields electoo finger laserguns that would be better workforce and soldiers
Guest chapter 12 . 10/31/2019
Tied to belief I always thought it was because so many royal families were founded by sorcerers, wargs, and etc

Magic always has a price the incest you can only bend nature (even if to pre-industrial peoples is a ruthless, brutal, cruel b word before modern medicine and transportation harmony with nature is a city dweller concept) in ways it wasn't meant to bend before it breaks akin to pollution and global warming it's your descendants who answer for your crimes, sins, ignorance, arrogance, and/or stupidity
Guest chapter 12 . 10/31/2019
Everyone but Robert says Rhaegar was something out of a fairy tale kind and wise an incredible warrior and musician The Durrandons were always the greatest warriors in Westeros and Westeros has this idiotic idea that swords are best weapons the end even the Mad King wouldn't harm his own blood that is just how Westeros thinks

The Targaryeans were least among the forty families of dragonlords

Archon was the title for times of crisis ruler of nation elected by lord freeholders

They allowed freedom of religion as opiate of the masses one day things will get better but didn't believe in any themselves they may have paid lip service however

Not all prophecies are useless, but none are certain, some are just self-fulfilling, and most are vague nonsense. People remember the prophecies that come true, not the ones that don’t
Guest chapter 11 . 10/31/2019
The Valyrians made slaves work themselves to death in countless numbers
TMI Fairy chapter 12 . 10/31/2019
I'd love to see Oberyn pull his smooth moves on Jaenera and get gelded or roasted :)
Nymeria and her daggers/poisons - groan - the TV fanfic is sooo stupid!
I'm not sure if Viserys would be so friendly to Oberyn - as far as he knows the Martells did not lift a pinky to help him after Ser Jon's death.
TheOnlyKing chapter 12 . 10/31/2019
Thanks for the awesome chapter, I'm glad it doesn't seem like you're making Viserys a spoiled brat when it makes no sense for him to be one when he lost everything. It's awfully cliche to make him mad as well.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/9/2019
Ned's Thoughts please!
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