Reviews for Arclight Foundries
Soupreme chapter 23 . 7/16
I was late in reading this, but damn, this was marvelous even if it's short, which I still appreciate. Thanks for a good read!
Tetho chapter 3 . 6/14
Mhm, is it possible for Jaune to make some kind of MJOLNIR Armor that could help him with his condition? Since knowing the Breach and the Fall will/might happen.
Rake1810 chapter 18 . 6/10
I absolutely love the development you’ve given to Coco. You’ve done such a good job making her such a good character
saintpatrick17 chapter 10 . 6/4
This is a decent story but holy shit the australian for velvet just needs to fucking stop. It reads like a shitty joke, and totally ruins any tension. We know how velvet talks, and thank fucking god its not like this. It was mildly amusing at first, but as time goes on its just getting more and more annoying. Honestly, Crocodile Dundee sounds more comprehensible than Velvet at this point. Seriously man, it's just not working.
KorevainsoLightshire chapter 1 . 5/13
Well this is intriguing, I'll read to see how it goes. However there is one major flaw, heat, welding, metal-working, blacksmith-ing, are all things that will increase one's heart rate. Heat on its own is a danger as for every 1 degree inner body heat rises the heart will increase 10 beats per minute, which can be pretty dangerous even for someone with a healthy heart. So I think you chose the wrong body weakening condition for Jaune in this fanfic but I'll otherwise just ignore that.
Katto17 chapter 10 . 4/29
As an Aussie myself, u did pretty good. Pretty aight
Draco chapter 23 . 3/29
If you feel weird about writing Coco as not gay, you could always just say she is bi, or even bi with a preference for women over men most of the time. It’s not like sexuality is just a whole “check this box here” kind of thing. The whole thing is a sort of range of variables, or a sliding scale if you prefer that analogy. Not sure if that helps, but just felt I’d throw it out there for what it’s worth in case it does.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/4
Can I order a mini gun that uses 12-gauge buckshot?
Guest chapter 23 . 3/3
Pls continue
StonerMcWeedPot chapter 10 . 1/23
Did Velvet turn Australian halfway through the first half of the story? She wasn’t talking that way in the first few chapters. Was it because she was nervous around Jaune at first. Also, it’s hella funny when she talks with that accent
The Reading Dragon 666 chapter 23 . 1/4
So, when will Jaune meet Coco's parents? Other than that I enjoy your stories and its really really good! Please keep up the excellent work!
246vili chapter 23 . 12/16/2019
It went as well as it could have went.

I really like the story so far.

Keep up the good work.
Takedown Paladin chapter 7 . 12/4/2019
Karl Franz... I see you're a man of culture as well.

SUMMON THE ELECTOR COUNTS
Sm0keyPanda chapter 23 . 11/26/2019
Dear gods I love the dynamic between Coco, Jaune, and Jaune's parents.
I love it so much.

I cannot wait for more of this fic!
IcyStream chapter 17 . 11/26/2019
Pretty sure Coco’s gun is named Gianduja, but I like The Grimm Dazzler better.
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