Reviews for Realisations
Guest chapter 4 . 5/7
This is such a great fanfic! You can really tell you put a lot of effort and time into it. It's so underrated for the quality! rawr ~ I adore this so much, thank you for your great work!
Seleayn chapter 1 . 4/19
one would say you're a med student, or an author who REALLY does extensive resesrch, my head just can't keep up with different names (I'm the type to memorize how they work/application, but can't remember their names)
Sydney chapter 7 . 4/19
I enjoyed all the chapters and how detailed you were. It really felt like something out of the show, the way layout was and all, especially with the information on the germs. Loved it!
Mathew5641 chapter 7 . 3/28
I'm always a sucker for a good romance
skywolf666 chapter 1 . 3/24
I read these awhile back on mobile, but unfortunately for me, my phone didn't allow me to leave any reviews or even favourite the stories. I had to do a bit of running about, and I hate to admit I forgot to go back for your stories. After reading the manga, though, I rushed right back to FFN! I'm glad I found you and your works! I'm loving the style you have, the simplicity and the match of the manga's tone throughout the story. That really is difficult to capture without the images to go along with all of those "pop ups" that you see in regards to explanations and definitions, yet you managed to really make it work, and work rather seamlessly, at that. I was never once taken out of what I was reading, and it felt like it was simply an extension of the Cells At Work manga at large. I really enjoyed this!

~ Sky
BlackLadybug225 chapter 7 . 3/20
I could easily imagine your story being one of the episodes in the anime series. Truly enjoyable and educational, thank you for sharing!
MistyMegan chapter 7 . 1/29
I loved the story & I look forward to if you make a continuation of it. You're an awesome and creative writer. And thanks to you, I found a new good song. After reading chapter 6, I listened & looked up all the lyrics to You're Mine by Disturbed, & immediately downloaded it. _¥
Guest chapter 5 . 1/26
Wow, this is great. Really enjoy the way the relationship is developing, it feels quite realistic and cannon. Also great situations you are comming up with, I can tell you have a lot of microbiology/ clinical knowledge
SomeRandomPenName chapter 7 . 1/18
I really enjoyed this work. The story was light and fun to read, no ostentatious drama even though there were some rough times for the characters. Everyone felt in-character, you really captured their original essence. Regarding the quality of the language, I would leave a small word of advice: watch out for the syntax. Some sentences felt like they may have been ok if spoken, but felt a little backwards or twisted written out. I had to re-read them a few times to understand them. Sometimes crucial commas were missing or in the wrong place and that changed the meaning of the phrase. But otherwise, this was very well written! And as someone with medical training, I thoroughly enjoyed the accuracy of the microbiological material you integrated to the story. All in all, well done!
mnemosyne23 chapter 7 . 6/13/2019
oh, my heart! this was so beautiful and wonderful and romantic. 5 stars!
writingrampant chapter 7 . 5/6/2019
Love the fluff! Love the story! As an ICU RN, love the technical details.
DreamFeathers chapter 7 . 3/26/2019
Awww! Definitely worth binge reading! How you brought 1146 and 30(forgot the rest of her number) just madw me go awww. And most definitely giddy about the prospect of new matchmaking with 4989 (?).
I really can't wait to read more!
As said before, really do enjoy your way of writing and how accurate you are keeping it when it comes to anatomical science, microbiology and bacteria.
IronYan chapter 7 . 3/25/2019
I make overall review of the story, not by chapters, so…

I liked how you pictured friendly chit chatting, romance and combat scenes. Educational part interesting too (to be honest after second read I skip those parts ;)). All that make me feeling like I read manga or watch anime. In all of that story pillars you found right balance. That's why your story doesn't bother to read.

In Malaria chapters I’ve been touched by scene with 1146 rushing to search of 3803. Scene in the bone marrow. Peck in the cheek. Unsureness. Confessions. First sweet kiss. I cherish those lovely scenes.

Neutrophils, helping their friend 1146 to understand who his true love is, were pictured funny.
Rare of the moments in some chapters were drawn out, but I really think it’s not critical.

Oh, and maybe it’s only for me, but you can describe situations so well that at times I can draw visual image in my head. So, basically, I watch anime in my thoughts. )))

I’d liked very much those realizations of 1146 and 3808 about their feelings to each other. How it slowly, even cautiously forming from something ephemeral into awareness, a desire to make it real, and finally, in mutual confess and first real kiss.

Reasoning in their heads similar to my own, when I pondered about one girl in university where I studied. I really liked her. And I have one terrible question on my mind – is she remotely feeling something similar about me? Painful unsureness, but in the same time beautiful sweet torment…

Oookay it’s becoming too personal. ))) Wraping up with this big review. All I want to say is keep up the good work, Mira Avis!

P.S. Glad to see your writer mastering improved in “H&M” in comparison with “Realisations”.
DreamFeathers chapter 1 . 3/25/2019
Ohhhhh! You're a microbiology student? No wonder your writing is so facinating and... do i even dare to say it without unintentionaly making it sound bad?... siency accurate. That's one of the points i love about it in manga and that's what makes your story truly in a leaque of your own! I feel like i'm continuing to read the manga!
Science aside, my impression based on this first story is that your story is very nicely structured and thought out. I can already feel that you have mapped out the plot and you know what you want to tell. Your way of storytelling is solid and very pleasant to read. I didn't even notice that i had wolfed down the first chap.
My only suggestion is perhaps asking for a friend to beta or have a readthrough from beginning to end like reding new text when you're done for typos. I didn't notice anything big, but i think there was couple of tiny ones - nothing disturbing. But i think those are kinda fun to try and spot, trying to brush up ny english.
Any case - i do enjoy this story and i can't wait to get on with the next chap... speaking of which...
snowfox246 chapter 7 . 2/11/2019
perfection.
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