Reviews for Jaune Arc: Knight of Hunters
ericsofly2 chapter 14 . 6/21
Update please
Super Saiai chapter 14 . 5/6
Before Jaune can unleash Excaliblast, maybe have him be able to use Artoria's other techniques, like Strike Air and Hammer of The Wind King?
Kenrio chapter 1 . 4/14
So he will hide his weapon because of some immature reason? Sorry I am out of this trash story
Tetho chapter 12 . 3/9
NOOOOOO, MY SHIP!

Welp, time to go back to Sun and Blake.
Tetho chapter 10 . 3/9
JAUNE AND BLAKE! MY SHIPS FLIES! TAMAMO-SAMA GRACEFULLY ACCEPTED HER AS JAUNE'S WIFE! WOOP!
Tetho chapter 5 . 3/9
IS MY SHIP DEAD?!
BLAKE and JAUNE
Tetho chapter 4 . 3/9
BLAKE AND JAUNE!

I HAVEN'T SEEN ONE!
Tetho chapter 3 . 3/9
Blake and Jaune!
Tetho chapter 2 . 3/9
WOOT, BLAKE AND JAUNE! WOOT!
AvidGamer chapter 8 . 2/19
The amount of stupidity in the character interactions of this one chapter alone makes me amazed I got this far...
I can't help but feel that you are clueless as to how people act around each other, to say nothing of how relationships (friendly or otherwise) work.
Grow up, get some exposure, then try again
Rider126 chapter 14 . 2/16
Will you update this anytime soon dude?
XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 2 . 12/21/2019
There are a few jarring errors in your writing. The first one is that you seem to be very lax on your grammar. I've noticed numerous spelling errors that bring your readers out of the story. You also tend to misuse certain words. From what I've seen with the word misuse it has mostly been minor so that's a plus. The final thing that I noticed was that you switch from the past tense, the present tense, and the future tense for no reason whatsoever. Pick one and stick to it. There is a way to switch around the tenses, but without putting in linebreaks every time you do it I just don't see it being put into effect very well in this type of story.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/14/2019
What else can I say aside that this is boring?
The Black Wolf of the Arks chapter 14 . 12/12/2019
Aww, no harem? At least a small one with Pyrrha and Ruby? It's a shame, for your first story, you where setting the bases pretty well on the first chapters, but don't worry, I'm not complaining, is just both my perv/harem-loving side and Lancaster side speaking. Though, should you change your mind on the future when you get more experience, and at least trys it, I wouldn't complain either.

Also, I was hoping for Excalibur Proto as Jaune's sword, I love it's design far more than Excalibur's, but that doesn't matter that much, it's still Excalibur. So far it's an amazing fic and a great crossover with FATE, I'll look forward to read more, keep up with the good work.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/8/2019
It pisses me off he keeps using his canon sword instead of the sword he’s actually good at. He limits himself consciously instead of improving himself with something that would give him an advantage
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