Reviews for Jaune's Arc-ellent Adventure
Jay Man1 chapter 1 . 8/4/2019
A time travel protagonist with a proper mindset, the space time continuum is wrecked by my presence so let me fix everything I can while I can. I will mention that I forgot the this was a one shot while I was reading it and I was grieved to find no chapter button at the bottom. I hope this story carries on.
randomidiot1816 chapter 1 . 5/14/2019
Hey Harmonious, the discord server wants more! best of luck in these fanfics!
MaverickHunter13 chapter 1 . 3/20/2019
This is really good, I can't wait for the next chapter.
BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 1 . 3/5/2019
I love this!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2019
Awesome story please continue soon it's great
Skykitsune chapter 1 . 12/30/2018
Very Relic of the Future start, but let's see how this pans out. (alsolamp)
norris321 chapter 1 . 11/12/2018
A truly fun read and is very in character for Jaune to help someone even if they may once have been an enemy. I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the great work. Have a nice day.
H21H chapter 1 . 10/25/2018
Interesting take on the whole time-traveling so far, hope you wont make it too angsty in the future (seems to be how most of these fics turn out). Looking forward to more.
Dr. Valentine chapter 1 . 10/24/2018
This is very interesting. There are definitely Relic of the Future vibes, but it is obviously heading to a different direction. Seems like Jaune is just gonna keep adopting children. First Emerald, then Cinder, then who? Sun? Adam? Ilia? Mercury? I hope Jaune just gets a giant family, and this story gets really fluffy.
readerjunkie chapter 1 . 10/22/2018
very nice start to a new story cant wait to see what happens next
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2018
i hoped that jaune was going to save cinder also
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2018
Interesting. YOu have my attention and i cant wait for more. Will he save neo too?
RedFistCannon chapter 1 . 10/21/2018
Okay I got three things to say:
a) I know you'll probably receive a lot of this but your story looks similar to Relic of the Future by Coeur, I know it's not the same and I actually like the differences there are as well as your writing style and depiction of Emerauld's thoughts (less dark than Coeur's version). You should write that you were inspired by ROTF just in case some troll decides to be stupid and report you.
b) Just a small grammatical note:
I'm Arab and in the Arab alphabet, the sound of the letter "p" does not exist.
We only have the sound of the letter "b".
Basically, it's "Abu Hassan" (Which translates to "Father of Hassan")
c) I'd love it if Jaune got some kind of middle eastern garb like a Fez (it's like the Hat Aladdin wore in the Disney movie, except bigger) or or you could try this:
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(but with different color scheme)
Lowbacca's Roar chapter 1 . 10/20/2018
This fic's existence makes me smile.

Keep up the good work!
0Lex0 chapter 1 . 10/20/2018
Well i liked it, love the alternatives vibe im getting here, you rock~
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