Reviews for A Devil at Work |
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Danirodriguez1995 chapter 5 . 8/2 Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched. |
JesusRed Hyudou chapter 5 . 7/20 UwU |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/18 Please update |
goldshqipe chapter 4 . 7/2 While I'm not really a fan of harem, I can accept the pairing being a small harem, just Seek and Akeno, adding Grayfia is gonna be a bit wrong for me to watch but I'm not gonna say anything about it. Anyways, hope you update soon Keep up the good work (PS keep the harem to a minimum please, max 3 of 4 girls) |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/1 Please update soon |
Gamma-X chapter 5 . 6/17 Good chap. Perhaps, though, you should read some lemon fics first to get a grasp for how to write a good lemon? That's what I'd do anyway, and keep some tabbed for references to help improve. But yeah. Keep up the good work! And wow, that guy is a creep. He wants to rape and make Seekvaira into his personal sex doll? God damn.. SHE'S NARUTO'S! HOW DARE YEE! Lol. But anyways, the Andromalius? What kinda clan is that? That a fanmade clan? I read they could make weapons out of thin air with energy and give it solid form. Is that the same here? Ja Ne~! |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/16 Actually Akeno reason could be that she know how bad a relationship between a human and the supernatural could end sprcially After what happens to her mother |
Gold Testament chapter 1 . 6/12 I can kind of imagine Issei, Kiba, and Koneko dragging a tied up Naruto to Akeno. |
goldshqipe chapter 5 . 6/9 It's an amazing story dude, good job. Can I also suggest that you keep the harem to a minimum of 5 or 6 girls, that would be better than putting 10 to 20 girls, you'd be a bit more original, but you do you. I'll support you either way Hope you continue |
Jose19 chapter 1 . 5/31 There is a reason for Akeno rejecting Naruto is not related simply of the lifespan, which states that Devils live ten thousand years in average but social rank, and customs. Devils pay a premium on power of their bloodlines, and making their Clans stronger so a normal Human has no chance unless he has a Sacred Gear or has a unique power. |
Dasgun chapter 5 . 5/14 -/ |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/11 This naruto is an modern day one so his personality is different than original because you and I both know the original had mental and emotional issues because of the village you can't so complain |
ElementalMaster16 chapter 5 . 4/7 Pretty interesting story so far, hard to say more since we've barely scratched the surface. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_) |
agnar chapter 1 . 3/29 except, if its not reincarnated or transmigrated Naruto, then it isn't actually a Naruto crossover, see? It's just an OC human you named Naruto, and thus, it's false advertising to draw in Naruto fans to a straight DxD fic with an OC main character. |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/25 Though I don't mind naruto being an original character the yelling or having to say it out the attacks is what I don't like |