Reviews for desert raised
Frie-Ice chapter 9 . 3/21/2019
A part of me has wondered what this series version of Sam's breathing of the Galra war would be like? I mean he'll have to explain that not all Galra are bad, since he and his family have helped Shiro raise Keith, and he'll probably would have to tell them that one of their own piolets had made first contact and had manged to have a child with her.
HibinoMirai chapter 9 . 3/19/2019
Pidge is best sister.
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Whoa... Deja vu anyone?

Haha, thanks for the chapter!
mountainelements chapter 9 . 3/19/2019
Keith has the relief of knowing Shiro doesn't hate him, and we get to find out the aftermath of the prank. Win/Win! :)

I'm looking forward to Allura's point of view. I have trouble liking her because of her treatment of Keith in season 2 which was then repeated over and over again in so much fanfiction so I'm hoping that it will help. Thanks for the update!
Grima chapter 9 . 3/18/2019
Still planning to continue the series? Or, something new?
AlecGateway chapter 8 . 3/7/2019
AAAAAAAAHHHH OMG THIS WAS THE ABSOLUT !

I LOVE IT!
OH GOSH I LOVE IT SO MUCH!
THANK YOU!

YOU'RE AMAZING!

Alec
Frie-Ice chapter 8 . 3/2/2019
Something tells me that the next chapter would be either of Allura or the Red Lion.
Grima chapter 8 . 3/1/2019
Aw, it's almost over. Planning to continue on the next part of this series? Or, not?
mountainelements chapter 8 . 3/1/2019
That stunt was so pointless yet great! I'm having fun imagining everyone's reactions to seeing Shiro's name on the scoreboard. :) I'm glad that Keith finally showed Pidge the scout ships. I had been wondering why he didn't do it earlier. Thanks for the update!
Frie-Ice chapter 7 . 2/9/2019
Looks like that I guessed right, and there is only one more chapter to go. Wow. I'm looking forwarded to reading it.
Grima chapter 7 . 2/8/2019
Any plans for the next one? Or, this will be the last part of the series?
mountainelements chapter 7 . 2/8/2019
This is so sad. I'm glad that Keith, Pidge, and Colleen were all able to support each other. Shiro's parents never got the chance to meet Keith. Maybe after the paladins return to Earth? Thanks for the update!
Frie-Ice chapter 6 . 1/21/2019
Since you are planning to do eight chapters in this fic, the next update might be of Pidge. As well as Keith tell her and Colleen of his Galra heritage, the hidden ships and his and Pidge's plans on find the three through the Garrison, before they meet Lance and Hunk on the night that changed their lives, is my guess.
MaraDixen413 chapter 6 . 1/21/2019
I have tears streaming down my face at four twenty in the morning I hope you're frikn happy with yourself. Oh the feels.
unavailable.101.goodbye chapter 6 . 1/20/2019
omg when they said goodbye to each other ;_;

"Go break an arm."
haha
EuphratesLeap chapter 6 . 1/20/2019
Aaaaah no my babies ;0; Keith is going to be absolutley crushed. I love the way the chapter ended though! Only thing I'll be sad to see go is Keith's connection with Blue; I'm really hoping they'll get a moment together in the future where they can still be there for eachother even though Lance's bond will be there. Keith doesn't deserve to lose the Lion and three of his family. I'm glad he'll have Colleen and Katie though. Altogether I can't wait for more! Thanks for the chapter :)
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