I am more incline to skip Elliott and Ana now and delve to Christian and Ana and make their love story more palatable. Truth and honesty in a relationship. Thank you very much.

So Elliott cheated on Ana besides he fucked her for himself and didn't care much whether she was satisfied. For Christian it was Ana first before him and made sure she is fully satisfied and that was just their first night and a promise to a monogamous relationship.

It would have been hotter if Christian met Ana first. Elliott is very ordinary to generate a buzz but he did pursue Ana until she gave in. Now he has fizzled.

Ana met Elliott first and what happened to them, now here she is with Christian Grey. Have to read more to where she was and where she is heading, but Ana's connection with Christian seems heated now.

Hola. Cuándo terminarás está historia. CG es intenso, profundo y muy gris...

Pobre Elliot. Tan tonto. Humillado por nada menos que Elena, yuck.
Y que piensa él, que puede enfrentar a Christian? Cómo duele sentirse traicionado, verdad? Pero,. No es capaz de aceptar sus errores.
Cuál es el estado de Kate?

Please update

Omg I never get my fill or reading this story, hoping and excited for the next chapter, I really love how brilliant are Christian’s plans.

Elliot is kind of the most awesome person to hate. He’s awful. Elliot’s arrogance and selfishness made it possible for Christian to woo Ana for Christian to ready himself in plain site. Christian fought the fight brilliantly. Every move was made with absolute care and precision so he was ready. Just awesome. And Elliot was clueless to it all thinking he was getting away with murder. Christian was there laughing is way to bliss

I’ve read 9 thru 17 and enjoyed each chapter. Christian Grey has changed his BDSM life style because he’s found someone to love but hasn’t completely given up taking control on all things pertaining to his private life that would cause trouble. This was a very interesting story to bad you never completed it would have loved to read about the wedding and Elliot finally failing to cause Ana/Christian any trouble.

Ana can’t be that naive she needs to think how he’s treating her and break it off with Elliot. Like Grace said she deserves better.

How long is it going to take Ana finding out that Elliot is now and has been cheating on her most of the time they have been together. Ana said those three words to Christian “I love you.”

Grace saw what Elliot was up too she has to know that he’s cheating on Ana. Don’t know about the strangle her during sex she saw it in a porn movie.

There are so many little clues that horn dog Elliot is cheating on her when is she going to realize it. Opening the door and not taking the chain off when she brought dinner to his apartment is one hell of a clue.

That was one hell of a chapter. Christian telling Ana his past life in BDSM how he was introduced into it and his promise to be honest with her from this day forward. He got rid of the playroom 2 yrs ago when he met her knowing he wanted something different Anastasia Steele. Another great chapter.

Reading Christian making love to Ana is all passion for both of them. Ana has never felt so loved by someone who wants to satisfy her needs before his.