Reviews for Gōsutoai
JadeDragon100 chapter 49 . 7/21
This was pretty fun to read and altogether enjoyable, wasn’t quite sure what path you were going to take with the ‘I see ghosts’ idea but I’d say it’s gone pretty good so far, though I’m kinda curious on the explanation on the Indra and Ashura reincarnations (maybe some sort of parasite thing where they’re not the soul itself but attached to the soul...?). Along with that, I’m curious as to how you’ll be continuing this with the akatsuki/canon plot line. For example, I could totally see someone summoning madara and Naruto having to face against him since I’m pretty sure you mentioned the edo tensei characters forgetting stuff they knew in the spirit realm so I could easily see madara trying to pull the original plot plan from forgetting stuff. Besides that, there’s been very few writing issues that I’ve found that go beyond a spelling error or two but they almost never detract from immersion so all in all I have to say this was quite enjoyable and I look forward to more.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16
Please update your stories .their among some of the best I have ever read.
cynicalneedssleep chapter 1 . 7/15
theriku260 sent me here and this story is great
JustDusty chapter 3 . 7/12
i thought the ghosts couldn't touch him so what was the point of that scene?
Guest chapter 20 . 7/10
I just wanted to point out that Iwa has a clan called the Kamizuru clan I think. Like the Aburame, they control insects. Unlike the Aburame, they control bees instead of beetles. Maybe you can introduce them
Guest chapter 19 . 7/10
Hello. I just wanted to point out some things. Firstly, I understand you want to bash Jiraiya, but the spy network thing is not really true. Naruto uses spirits, which can bypass any and all security, jutsu, seals and stuff, whilst Jiraiya has to sneak around, meet up with informants, and all that stuff.

Also, I love the bijuu kikaichu idea. But them having ears and tails is nit really original. That's not meant to be rude. I just...maybe you can get inspiration from Chomei rather. They can generally be larger and more aggressive. Maybe have powerful mandibles for biting. Since they have bijuu chakra, maybe they can also supply chakra and use the absorbed chakra to bolster their reserves. That way, users of the kikaichu can have a false bijuu mode. It can even be used to help Naruto use bijuu mode

Next thing. I'm not sure if you did it intentionally or not, but Minato sealed the Yang Half, ie the physical half, of Kurama inside Naruto, instead of the spiritual half. That one is sealed inside himself because of the Dead Demon Consuming Seal. Also, the Dead Demon Consuming Seal is NOT the seal used on Naruto. His seal is actually the Eight Trigrams seal. Minato used the Dead Demon Consuming Seal to seal half of the Kyuubi inside himself so that he could safely seal the Kyuubi inside Naruto using the Right Trigrams seal, which is made by combining two Four something seals. Most people confuse the two because the seal design is the same. Unfortunately, it has led to many lies about how you can only seal bijuu in babies, even though most bijuu are sealed inside grown children. The only exceptions are Gaara, who became a jinchuuriki whilst he was in the womb, and Naruto, who became a jinchuuriki the day he was born. The bijuu chakra already affected him before that too. That's why Kushina's pregnancy was rather 10 months instead of the normal 9.

Also I look forward to how you develop Sasuke, because of his Sharingan and the fact that Fugaku is alive to train him. Fugaku always held Sasuke against Itachi's standards, so it'll interesting to see how that'll play out

Also, Minato is fighting Yin Kyuubi for all of eternity instead of just mindless floating about.

That's it for me. I hope I'm not being rude or something. I jist wanted to give my thoughts and correct a few misconceptions. Thanks.

Last final thing. All strong ninja have a weird quirk. Perversion is a good one. It's better than spending majority of your life staring at a rock (Kakashi) or being a masochist (Hidan) or even developing a god complex (Nagato)
iremjohn00 chapter 5 . 6/29
M: I’ve been teaching him how to read
T: Yeah teaching how to read Uchiha propaganda
Kage-Shino chapter 44 . 6/19
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED! DID THEY GO INTO A SEPARATE DIMENSION I WHICH THEY WERE MARRIED OR SOMETHING?
Kage-Shino chapter 1 . 6/19
Hmm, Madara or Tobirama? Likely an Uchiha. Hmm...
Sudiotaku chapter 49 . 6/11
Cool story pls continue uploading
afallenheart chapter 49 . 6/9
I love this story and I can't wait to read what comes next!
visionlessone chapter 49 . 6/6
It's been almost a year since I last read this story. I am glad to see some new material on it. When should we start seeing the trials/invasion arc?
porkchop123ww chapter 2 . 5/24
The summery made me not want to read this. but the reviews did, so glad I read them.
Devashish Karatolios chapter 48 . 5/22
Referring to my review on the next chapter - I realize that my track record for creating stories is terrible, having tried and failed to create 19 stories both here and on Wattpad, but I've read almost every Naruto fanfic that has more than 100k words, and many more than that, with similar records for the other shows that I've watched. my fanfiction 'have-read' book is literally seven hundred strong, and the recommended list is almost as long, spread over sixteen fandoms. I like to think that with this experience, I am a pretty good critic when it comes to fanfiction. so I don't mean to be rude, if anything I said in that review is considered rude to you. I'm just trying to be as detailed as I can be, as fanfiction writers tend to like that.
Devashish Karatolios chapter 49 . 5/22
It's been almost two months since this update. I can't wait until this story has its next chapter. it's well written, and doesn't use many of the common tropes I've seen throughout the fandom. I also appreciate that Kakashi has the Mangekyou Sharingan and knows how to use it in this fic. It's rare that his experience in that facet is used to help Sasuke step off the path to going rogue. and I've never seen a 'Naruto has a Dojutsu' fic that goes into such a level of depth without listing the abilities when he gets the eyes. I would buy this story if it were finished and published as a novel, and I thank you for making such an intriguing story. I rate this story a 9.8/10 stars

Now that I've said all that formal shit that is used to rate the story, I can say that my only complaint is that it has so many crack-fic components despite not being marked as one, but it doesn't affect my rating of the story, because it doesn't overpower the more serious side of the story despite making an appearance every few chapters and sometimes lasting several chapters.
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