Nice

Loving this fanfic, I dont know what the other guy means by pathetic but really liking it so far. Hope that you dont take the oc thing too far and add too many

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That was pathetic.

Please Update soon!

Go with the jaune x pyrrah and harem idea it's a good idea for the story

I just read the chapters you have to far in one sitting and I have to say I loved every word of it! I love this new Jaune's attitude and way of doing things! Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter!

P.S. Jaune x Pyrrha x RWBY x Velvet FOR THE WIN!

Thanks for the chapter. :D :)

I really like what you've done with the story so far and I like how you did something new I ain't never seen with the Grimm having been reincarnated with somebody soul in it tho I hope you make your chapters a little bit longer in the future I can't wait to see what you do next make keep up the good work mate.

Please Update this soon!

You still takin OC’s? Cause I got one.
Could I suggest an OC? If so, could mine be like a SCP Foundation MTF Hammers Down Soldier? His name would be Dexter Raddfield. Everything he wears is black and orange or gray. He’d be white, stand at 7’3. Be what, around 280-90 ish pounds. Extremely Muscular. Have black hair and hazel eyes. No special facial features (I ain’t good with faces, could you help with it? Just don’t make it stupid though). His “combat attire” would be the standard SCP Nine Tailed Fox uniform just without the SCP markings. Now for his weapons, he’d just have an AuG 3 with a heavy barrel, bipod, 3.0x scope, and have 50 round drum mags, with a Browning M1919, and a M1917 Bayonet as a “knife” (even though it’s a fucking short sword if I’m being honest), and a SUPER SHORTY shotgun with a green laser sight, which would use frag, buckshot, dart or slug rounds. His regular attire would be long sleeve shirts and jeans. He has a strict and no funny business attitude. He likes: exercising, boxing, martial arts and some other stuff. His aura would be dull grey, while his semblance is a combination of SCP-106’s abilities and SCP-096’s, such as that he can make pocket dimensions and can walk through solid materials, but any blast or ray of bright light is extremely dangerous , besides that part he can go into a berserker mode, that happens if his aura dips down into the red, in which he would then transform a bit into 096, and would technically be “indestructible and unbeatable” for a short while in this state and will relentlessly attack his target until they are either dead or incapacitated(I know that’s a bit brutal but oh well).
He comes from a well off family, where his parents are Daniel Radfield, and Samantha Adams( her old last name before she married Daniel), with Daniel being a researcher in a “secret” Atlesian facility and his mother being a doctor and his 2 sisters are twins and are Jane and Sasha Raddfield, and are enlisted in the Atlesian military(if you didn’t know already, his home kingdom is atlas). His uncle is General Ironwood(though Dex likes to joke behind his uncles back and call him Irondick sometimes). He doesn’t hate Faunus, but he doesn’t really want anything to do with them. He is not gay or bisexual. He is straight. He likes to listen to songs like “Heaven is one step away”, or “55 Tage in Peking” or “Right Now, by Van Halen” ( I like these songs, don’t judge me).

nice use of red vs blue reference witht he "oh, fuckberries" bit

Love what I've seen so far, and since it seems that you're still actively working on this one, I might finally get to see a fanfiction properly finish in real time, for once :)

This Shizzz is motherfcking gold XD

Thanks Jorn for another awesome chapter. So far I really like where you are taking this story and I'm excited to see what becomes of your OC's. Good luck with the next chapter, and as always have fun writing.

Great chapter thanks for updating, jaune multi forms gun reminded me of pandora from Devil May Cry 4 a suitcase that transforms into 666 weapons including an armed motorbike, I would love if you turned the commando into something similar in the near future, keep up the great work.