The summary definitely didn’t live up to the fanfiction. I came here simply expecting some sort of reveal story and instead got an epic battle and interesting plot! Everyone seems so in-character, and the original character of the Empress is so intriguing to think about, and you made her very well! I hope that the Fentons will be able to realize they’re wrong about everything after everything... Valerie too, but at least she’s not pushing her thoughts on others while a more important threat is going on. The Fentons seem almost obsessed with hating ghosts; so much so that they are ignoring what is clearly happening. I’ve already written this in another comment, but thank you so much for writing this!

Ahhhhhh! This was amazing! I am on the edge of my seat. I love the way you wrote this! Thank you so much for writing this fanfiction :D

The Fenton's still refuse to face the fact that they can't force Danny to be tested for a possible cure when the world is at war against a ghost army. Once more, they still won't listen to reason about why Danny can't be restored to full human. I can understand why Mikey wants to blame Phantom for not showing up, but this is war! A single person can't be everywhere at once. I hope you something planned to not only prove to others that it's not Phantom's fault, but also help Danny come to grips with that fact no one is perfect. I can understand why the Foley's are upset about Tucker leaving, and in fairness, they should have been told he was leaving to help with clean up and repair. That might have been something they'd support. As for Valerie, I think her biggest problem is that she isn't seeing ghosts as sentient beings. She's only seen them from a negative point of view. So that is something that has to be address if she wants to really earn Danny's forgiveness. Otherwise, there's chance she will end up help the Fenton's attempt to cure Danny. Now, about you future annoucement. I don't think you should cut Valdez from this fic. She may be necessary in help organize the humans to work with Phantom's ghost allies for when the Empress returns. You have Mayor Jones, but I don't think that's enough. Stay safe and healthy

I cant wait to read more!

I feel Danny’s pain; this must have been what paramedics and firefighters must have felt when they dug out people from the rubble of the aftermath of 9/11, especially if they had to dig out corpses and tell their families, and if I were in his place, I would feel like I failed too, especially since his obsession is protecting people. But like Steve Rogers said in Civil War, “You can’t save everyone”, and that is, unfortunately, true here, it shouldn’t make Danny feel like a failure, especially when the Empress had a ghost seer on her side to help her prepare for this.
The confrontation between Danny and his parents... that hurt me. They’re so biased and set in their ways, that they can’t even see the bigger picture here and are just focused on “curing” Danny, believing his powers are “unnatural”, and it hurts me even more that Danny believes himself to be “unnatural”, when he isn’t. But Maddie trying to capture Danny using the Fenton Thermos... that is uncalled for.
I can see both sides of Team Phantom’s and the Foleys’ arguments. As parents, it must be terrifying to learn that their son and his friends have been involved in such horrifying, deadly situations and that they’re worried about them being killed and that they shouldn’t have the responsibility of saving the world on their shoulders. But since Team Phantom’s already dealt with situations like this, they feel like they’re the ONLY ones who can stop the Empress, especially Danny. Still, I hope the Foleys will allow Sam, Danny and Tucker to get out and stop the Empress, before it’s too late.
NO NATHAN! I can’t believe you killed him off! It makes sense, realistically, but still! Also, Mikey and Abigail’s interactions are realistic, and I hope Mikey réalisés that the Empress is to blame here, not Danny(at least he realises that blaming Danny is a coping mechanism, though)
Valerie... usually, I love her because she’s a badass queen, but I’m starting to hate her for being so hardheaded and blind to see that ghosts are more than aggressive, non-feeling beings, and that Danny and El don’t need to be “cured”. Still, I’m glad she apologised to Danny, and I understand her fears of Danny thinking “more like a ghost”, but I hope that with some MASSIVE character development, she changes her thinking.
(And I see that hint of ValxEl :))
Hopefully, all the ghosts will team up with Danny and the rest of Team Phantom to stop the Empress.
While I would have loved to see Valdez again, I understand. With the way things are, I get you not wanting to portray the police in a flattering light. I mean, I know there must be SOME police officers trying to do the right thing, but I get it.
Also, have you seen Butch Hartman’s DP graduation video yet?
Looking forward to your next chapter; keep on writing!
GhostWriterGirl out!

That confrontation with Danny's parents broke my heart. They just refuse to see and that keeps hurting Danny. Them calling his powers unnatural, him unnatural really hurts. I feel really bad for Jazz too and all the stress she's going through dealing with them. And then with the Foleys, it's hard because the teens and the parents both have points. I understand Mr. and Mrs. Foley wanting the teens to be safe and arguing that saving the world isn't their responsibility. Really it shouldn't be; in a better situation, there should be actually professionals that can deal with the Empress. But there isn't anyone else so it falls on Team Phantom and allies.
And Mickey and Abigail's conversation. I can't believe you killed Nathan! But that's realistic and so sad. I appreciate seeing the hard consequences of what happened. And it's also somewhat of an outside perspective since they don't know first hand what happened with Danny and the Empress. And Valerie. I'm happy she apologized and is working with Danny now but her clear biases against ghost are still troubling. Chilling even, since she's afraid Danny thinking like a ghost until he isn't human anymore. As if ghosts are inherently lesser than humans and he can't be both human and ghost.

Fue un gran capitulo ya espero el próximo o y entonces Danny es más poderoso de lo que era antes verdad ya que puede usar poderes que antes lo agotaban con mucha facilidad bueno tenía que volverse más fuerte de algún modo ya que el traje Fenton ya no está, además si tan solo los padres de Danny supieran lo que hacen el mismo Danny de intento ser un humano completo antes y ninguna termino exactamente bien en una su personalidad se dividió entre su lado humano y fantasma y en otra línea de tiempo alternativa la separación de Danny y su lado fantasma provoco que su lado fantasma se volviera malvado y destruyera todo el mundo por diez años, de echo solo usando el portal fantasma a la inversa podría volver a ser humano no obstante estoy seguro que sus padres en su a fan de “curarlo” lo lastimarian más que cualquiera de sus enemigos.

I don't think that there's anything wrong with one cop trying to do the right thing. Even in current conditions and how things are I refuse to believe all of them are voilent. Granted a good majority are and the stench of the foul group overpowers the odd rise but still.

Regardless, I enjoined the chapter and can't wait for the next one!

Great job with the story! I liked the character dynamics as always.
I wish you good health with all that's going on.

I'm drunk and it's nearly 3 o clock in the morning. I feel sick. But I enjoyed reading a lot! There's a lot I want to say nut I'm afraid right now I don't have the capacity to say it alljust know that I really loved it! See u next week!

As always, cool job. Wonder how Maddie and Jack will react when they find out that a 'halfa' can live a long, healthy life... because it already happened with Vlad. That will come as a shock.

And again, Jack, Maddie and Valerie are very closed-minded, and they're unwilling to change their preconceived ideas of ghosts unless reality kicks them in the face, and even then it's hard for them to realize they're wrong.

Keep the good writing.

Well... i understand your hesitation at wanting to write about police. but i think it would be an interesting parallel/metaphor if you were to include her in such a way that maybe she defends Danny to his parents... like “he’s still human, he’s still a person. just because he’s different than you - by half a species - he’s still deserving of respect, fair treatment, and he still deserves to have a choice and a voice.” idk if she was going to play another role in moving the plot forward somehow, but maybe that’s something you can consider.

and fuckin Nathan... poor motherfucker :/ i think Mikey’s feelings are valid and realistic, and it’s interesting that he’s aware that his feelings of blame are a coping mechanism of some kind.

and Danny is such a badass lmao. now that valerie knows he’s finally letting his “two personalities” blend together and show and he’s like “fuck it”. he’s definitely matured since the fic started.

also. fuck Maddie right now. and kinda fuck Jack, although he seems to be the more reasonable/fatherly of the two. fuck em both.

Nocturn, Undergrowth, Vortex and Technus. Just some other gosth that had managed to put the intire world at risk and that was only thanks to team Phantom that the world was safe.

This chapter was good. I am curious about how Amity Park will react to having friendly ghosts nearby.

Oh my goodness there is so much going on in this chapter, I love it. Maddie's in full guilt mode and Jack, well, I'm just happy he's trying to be reasonable. He still doesn't get it but it's better then trying to get him into a themos. While the Foley's are nice, and I understand why they don't want this for the kids, they still are a little bit unreasonable.

It's horrible that Nathaniel is gone( but I am secretly wondering if he's coming back as a ghost), but knowing Abigail and Mikey are alive is a plus. If Mikey really wanted to blame someone blame the empress, the one that threw the car! At least he is aware of the fact he is not being entirely rational, that will help in the long run. It's actually kind of weird how many times people blame others instead of the ones at fault.

As for Valerie I still want to yell at her a bit because Danny did try to explain the dog thing but she never listened! Sometimes it feels like she always has to be right in her eyes, everyone that says otherwise is either not as knowledgeable or lieing. She's better than the Fenton's but only by a bit. The good thing is that by being around Danny maybe she will see the truth, possibly just learning El's a clone might do that. It will definitely make her hate Vald more.

I also just kind of want to say that usually I don't like to read fanfics that kill-off canon characters but honestly I really love this even when it happens(through it is very rare kill-offs). So what I'm trying to say is you've done a great job with this story. Thanks for the chapter and keep safe as well please.

P.S. Don't worry that it's late, this updates more often than some others, not calling them out or being mean to them, just to let you know you're not the only one that misses updates every now and then.