Reviews for Tangled
Fyr RedNight chapter 9 . 2/27
This was an amazing and sweet story.

The characters, the plot and overall the way how you wrote every chapter made for a long-lasting reading experience.

The ending in particular made me feel bittersweet in a good way.
That little part with a young girl with blonde hair and blue eyes made me smile for the promises of a beautiful and hopeful future that came after surpassing hardships that I'd be very much up to read if it were to be written someday...
And this epilogue was as fantastic. Your take on the Arc parents is just awesome.
Really you've got a talent for pulling at my heartstrings...

You gave us an endearing alternate universe there, congratulations for this story and thank you for sharing this wonderful gift with us.

Concerning your concerns about the show proprer I can understand where you are coming from with this.
It's true it changed. The plot has and is keeping moving forward. The characters are evolving, growing, like real persons would. Or at the very least pretty much like real persons.
But even if I'm okay with this fact it's true that I'll always fondly look back at these first three volumes, these were good times, simpler and carefree times...
I don't always agree with the choices the writers back at CRWBY make and it's true RT sometimes do questionable decisions but at the end of the day I try to see the best in what they do for RWBY and hope the show progresses in a direction everyone can at least be somehow happy with.
Any input?

Anyhow, all this to say that I loved this story. Thank you again very much.

Until next time!
Hecseferblade chapter 9 . 2/21
I quite enjoyed this story, it was cute and moved along smoothly. Adding to my favorites
The Review Guest chapter 9 . 11/4/2019
Well done.

ALSO, IT WAS I! YEET GUEST! NO LONGER SHALL I BE TETHERED TO THIS MORTAL FORM, AS I FINALLY REMEMBERED MY PASSWORD FOR THIS GOD-FORSAKEN ACCOUNT!

But I shall always be your YEET guest, and you shall always be my writer. Call on the Name of YEET Guest, and he shall respond.
Siegfried XIII chapter 9 . 8/26/2019
I enjoyed this story a lot, it was well written and frankly it was beautiful, and each Weiss and Jaune romantic encounter that happened, my heart skipped a beat.

Thank you... for writing such a beautiful story.
Asher Silverman chapter 5 . 8/15/2019
This shit is cool
Nerdlydelicious chapter 9 . 5/21/2019
This whole thing left me ugly sobbing in a good way. Thank you.
Jaerskov Tempestwing chapter 1 . 4/23/2019
Just binged this whole thing. It got me hooked. Honestly, I think you wrote it better than the entire development team at RT. Now I'm depressed that this is over. Anyways, very good, well written and my main man Jaune got his love. Beast.
TopPercentage chapter 9 . 4/13/2019
Thank you for this. I really enjoyed this story.
It had my heart clenching, but in a good way.
Well done.
Lolerskin chapter 9 . 4/3/2019
So great ficyou really well showed characters thoughs and feels by letters and even ship is written reasonable. I liked reading that and it ended as one of my favourites. I wish you good luck with your next work!
vindictious chapter 9 . 4/1/2019
Know how you feel, my friend. The show has changed along with us. I'm not feeling the love for it like in the beginning, but maybe that's just me.
Maybe by the next season I'll feel like writing some more, but until then HART-NTG may be at a standstill.
Your own writing style has improved over the years, so don't ever think otherwise. I've enjoyed the stories you've written.
Hopefully another venue will catch your eye and spawn more stories.
Stay well.
yeet chapter 9 . 4/1/2019
As your YEET guest, it's my responsibility to inform you of a Fic well done. Your writing has been an intruiging and enjoyable break from the world-ending, long winded fics that have filled ff net for the past few years. A little bit of fluff is nice for a change.

Thanks for writing!
ZenithTempest chapter 9 . 3/29/2019
I disagree with you wholeheartedly that the show being written poorly is an unpopular opinion. Most objective people would look at RWBY's plot and come away thinking the writers took what could've been a vast and expansive world and turned it into the plot of a J-RPG, it's just not a popular opinion with the fans, most of whom are solely focused on which pairings they want the most.
Dharshan chapter 9 . 3/29/2019
I hear you, used to look forward to every episode and now I can't even bother to watch V6. Just hard to keep watching the show when the plot moves so slowly and predictably. I still love the universe though, and that is all thanks to the fanfiction. There are several complete stories here that take what RT did do well and do something more interesting.
PrometheusDark chapter 9 . 3/29/2019
Hell of a ride, had a blast from start to finish. There's simply not enough well written in-character White Knight out there.

You've definitely added something worthwhile to the sea of amazing RWBY fanfiction. Thank you so much for the wonderful story!
Rapticon sr. the Goldenhearted chapter 9 . 3/29/2019
As a fan of White Knight I greatly appteciate this story and I also confess to be one who has lost all enthusiasm in the show preferring to stick to the fandom side.

Your thoughts at the end were the very reason I just about gave up on the show. That and I have had a bad run with some rabid fans mostly shippers. Not saying all are bad just that there is always bound to be the worst type. But i digress good work either way.
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