Reviews for JA Criminal Consulting
Lazerwolf2000 chapter 5 . 7/19
Thank you to every author who made this story! It’s great!
RohanVos chapter 5 . 7/10
Wonderful story, I really enjoyed the interplay between Roman and Neo. I am always a fan of AU stories and yours is pleasurably unique. The characters are are different but still similar to their cannon counterparts. I look forward to your next chapter and hope that all is well with you!
Ahmed chapter 5 . 7/7
I appreciate your work man, may your muse never desert you like mine seems to have done
Shoytahn chapter 2 . 7/3
Loved everything except the OC. Just going to ignore her existence for the rest of the story.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29
Dude I completely respect your decision on abandoning rwby and wish you the best of luck
Josh Spicer chapter 5 . 6/23
Jaune and Mel huh?

Can't say I disagree.

Roman and Neo father/daughter, mentor/mentee relationship?

Can't say I disagree.

Cinder interfering early despite the deadline coming up soon even if Roman hadn't given her a reason to interfere?

Odd choice that and one made to bring up some tension that I don't think was really needed.

Ask him? As in Jaune probably? Wonder where this is going.

Nice to see y'all back. This is the kind of Jaune story that rarely comes around so I'd love to see more updates.
mochafraptor chapter 5 . 6/22
I really love this. Jaune has everyone practically dancing in his palm, and it's only like an afterthought to him.
X3runner chapter 5 . 6/22
I wonder why his sisters wife kid is such a big deal to jaune it’s basically an adopted nephew at most if it were her who was having the kid that would be a touch different but as it stands he wouldn’t have much of a link other than a marriage in the family unless the kid is linked to him in a familial way though that would up the stakes for him but other than that the kid being born to his sisters wife shouldn’t really affect him that much . did he intend to bank roll the kids well-being ? Also I feel like you kinda set up a parallel between the relationships of jaune and his sister and Neo with Roman. If anything what cinder and her minion just did pushed Roman into jaune’s camp removing any potential threat of force not being used on him rather than A carrot And stick situation she had she just chose the outright stick she really seeks self destructive.
Amortal chapter 5 . 6/22
I still find this story interesting and entertaining. I look forward to more, all the best.
Hecseferblade chapter 5 . 6/21
I can already see Jaune using that heist cinder planned as an additional fall plan, it’ll perfectly mend into his plans and Roman can thank cinder for giving him the final piece of the puzzle for his grand heist that she was so impatient to hear about.

Little sabotage here, few crossed wires there and most of the white gang grunts are in police custody
Billyking11 chapter 5 . 6/21
an update nice! wish you would make this a regular update
Alex TF chapter 5 . 6/20
Wow, never expected an update for this. I liked how Neo handled things, pretty on point I would say. Anyway, I won’t complain over an update for this story, makes me happy to see it. Hopefully we’ll get more on the future. Keep up the good work.
The Impossible Muffin chapter 5 . 6/20
It is a shame this isn't a consistent story. I do enjoy this.
quaker212 chapter 5 . 6/20
This story is rubbing me in all the right ways
LuckyShadowWolf chapter 5 . 6/20
...Well Jaune is about to have an uninvited guest in the form of an ice cream sadist! Although I wonder at what specifically Neo is intending to ask him other then the status of the plan itself. Looking forward to seeing things ramp up as was suggested in this chapter and glad to see this tale still kicking... Or should that be whipping?
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