Reviews for Brothers in Arms
NB132 chapter 4 . 7/18
Nice story fam
KorevainsoLightshire chapter 3 . 7/7
So, will you update this soon? It's been awhile and this is such a great fanfiction, I really hope you do update.
Majin Othinus chapter 1 . 7/7
My guy, are you healthy? Haven't heard from you in a while. I hope you're safe.
BorderLand chapter 4 . 6/18
The guy has two goddesses fighting over his atention and he will get magic later. Who needs aura when you have magic really?

I have not watched RWBY for a long time now but the humans from before didn't have aura and they were still much stronger die to their magic

When Ozpin finds out about Jaune eventual girlfriends the guy will crumble and cry like a baby. Poor him.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/28
Are you ok? Getting worried here about you.
JHFTS chapter 4 . 5/17
After finding you on AO3, I came here to see if there were any other stories you've written. Haven't read anything RWBY-related in a while so I figured why not, and was very pleasantly surprised. Almost all of the Jaune-focused stories I've read skip straight from "Jaune finds new possibility" to "Jaune joins Beacon", or at best give a perfunctory "and then Jaune worked really hard" training montage. Meanwhile you spend time having Jaune rebuild the shrine, figure out what he wants out of life, and get to know his divine copilots. You didn't rush to start the story, you took the time to get me to care about the cast first, and I appreciate that.

It's been a while since you've posted anything, so here's hoping you're doing well.
Majin Othinus chapter 4 . 4/16
I hope you're doing okay.

Are there any plans on Chapter 5?
Anon E. Moose chapter 4 . 3/1
Eh, good enough so far, I really like the characterization of the gods. Though there really needs to be SOMETHING about this manipulation with his aura, that he was essentially massively crippled and does not even know it yet.
BUT: If Jaune really has no aura to use AND cannot get some more AND will always be only able to take one hit, no matter how weak, the he is already dead.

Everybody will be able to kill him easily, let alone groups of attackers.
Having those gods is in no way a 'balancer' as you wrote under chapter 1.
If it is and will always be laughably easy to take out JAUNE the story will still be over, and any competent attacker WILL aim for him, not his equipment nor the mysterious, powerful girls.

If you really stay with the plan that Jaune will be "super nerfed" after he was, as you note, far, far from OP - while everyone else with some focus on them was for no reasons given stronger and/or had won the semblance lottery - then continuing does not sound interesting.
He will only ever be able to carry those gods in sword and shield form around and hope to not get hit ever (more than once at least), nothing more, as everybody who does or might want to interfere in this quest can take him in TWO hits.
One as weak as one likes, then a real one. Result: Jaune at least down, maybe dead.

This makes no good story. Where the main character can do nothing to defend himself.
KorevainsoLightshire chapter 4 . 2/19
I've just found and read this and I must say it's truly great. It can be interesting, sure some small things annoy me but I still think you are doing a fantastic job as a writer for the most part. I wonder what Jaune's wish is gonna be, following the line of this story either something for the siblings or he'll end up keeping it 'til near the end where he uses the to not destroy humanity or something.
TheOneDino chapter 4 . 1/26
Can’t wait for Jaune Christ to go and recruit his 12 disciples or something like that. I liked your depiction of the two gods. Felt like they were two relatable humans rather than two vaguely powerful beings.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/24/2019
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
1995hzq chapter 4 . 12/20/2019
Its been a while, since its almost Christmas, wonder if the last chapter of Quearitur will be up? Really want to see the conclusion of the gacha clubs Christmas capers.
Dethcat chapter 1 . 12/8/2019
The next messiah. I hope you make the point that neither of the gods are good or evil, they just exist. They are perfectly balanced, integral to each other.
EMIYA KURO chapter 4 . 12/5/2019
AWESOME! You've really crafted them in such depth... I'd pay for this if I could...
AbyssalDaemon chapter 4 . 11/30/2019
I coudn't help but grin throughout this chapter at the interaction between Darkness and Jaune. You've done a great job at giving the two gods a sense of personality and it really shone through in this chapter. I really liked Darkness granting Jaune access to magic, because it seems like something that could create all sorts of butterflies. Especially if he still tries to do Beacon and Ozpin is capable of sensing said magic. Also, Darkness' preening during Jaune's praises made me laugh. The 'dere was strong throughout this chapter between the two.

The interaction between Light and Jaune was a bit more thought provoking. On the first read through, Light wanting to grant Jaune a wish felt like a bit of cute interaction between the two until we got to the discussion between Light and Darkness. At that point, I had to go re-read the scene and it feels a bit tragic. People didn't talk to Light because they liked her, they spoke to her because they wanted things things from her and she was also forced to act as the "older" mature twin. In some ways she feels more lonely then Darkness because despite having been surrounded by people, she could never build a personal connection with any of them. Jaune seems to be slowly breaking through her walls but it is interesting to consider how Darkness is more overt with her issues whereas as Light seems to try and hide them away.

Also, I love the bit about a slime being the first grimm. Between that, having magic, and his quest board, I wonder if Jaune will ever catch onto the fact he's effectively become an old JRPG character.
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