Oh fuck this left me as such a mess. I love it. Haha I should be doing summer assignments but nooo I’m sitting here with my heart aching for Max and Beth and what they could have been.

Great chapter!

NOOOOO! :( :( :( he never came :'( im sobbing,
but this was a GREAT story and i looked forward to every update. Thank you, ilysm!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

It is a really good way to wrap most of it up! I especially liked the last few sentences.

This is a really good version of the Gallager Girl Series! And I am seriously on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter! Great fanfic! Highly recommended for people who love the series! 10/10!

This chapter is awesome and sad. Please update soon.

dude. i can’t believe this doesn’t have more views. it’s so awesome!

Bex and Grant are so cute! I hope we get to see an interaction between Grant and Luke soon. I can’t wait to read the rest of this story

Omg! I bet none of them saw that Edwards reveal thing at the end! Was not expecting that at All!
Will they let Beth stop Max from joining the Circle or will it be too late?
Update soon xxx

I'm honestly obsessed with this story! I usually don't like stories revolving around OC's because I'd rather read about Cammie and the original gang, but for some reason, I was compelled to click on this story and I'm SO glad I did! Seriously, this is so good! It's dramatic, it's enticing, and all the characters feel so real and easy to get a grasp of who they are...it's awesome.

Also, I love Beth and Max's relationship. There's so much depth there, it really feels like Max is super pissed that Beth couldn't remember him (p.s. why could she remember everyone else, but not Max?) even though they were BEST FRIENDS! And Max knows Zach?! Max was part of the Circle?! BETH was part of the Circle?! And THE CIRCLE IS STILL ALIVE?! Dude, this is absolutely amazing! :D

P.S. Your writing is so professional, I love it. And your characters' dialogue isn't contrived or forced, but it's really natural and real, and I can easily feel what the characters are feeling. Especially in this chapter where Beth and Max are arguing in the P&E barn...literally perfection! Is there a possible romance developing between Beth and Max, btw ;) It's not super obvious, but I can sense it, which is absolutely perfect. I hate when it's so blatantly obvious but the author is acting like it's not... *insert eye roll here* lol.

But yeah, I'm obsessed with this story! I can't wait to learn more about Beth's past, and about how they're all going to take down the Circle AGAIN! Ugh, chills just thinking about it! Awesome job! This story is seriously underrated, and deserves so much more attention!

Amazing story I love it. Isn't Jonas's last name Anderson

I’m excited to read the rest of this! Max and Zach seem pretty close so I’m interested to hear more about that. I also can’t wait to find out more about Lucas, since he must be Grant’s brother. Great job so far!

Good job so far! Can’t wait to read more

Oh so amy is princess Amirah?