| Reviews for Jaune Arc's Multiverse |
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  Raizor chapter 13 . 7/31 Just got to me by re-reading it. How about a viewing of the Aquaman movie from 2018 with Sienna as Mera, Adam as Orm (who would've thought) and Jaune as Arthur? Could be good and brings an opportunity to include Sienna into the Jarem. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/27 I think you may have made a mistake with the 13th chapter: mostly cause I can't enter it without my Internet crashing... |
 Rg Pascual chapter 13 . 7/15 Man I hope we get another potential future, I kinda like it because its original and not rip-off on some video game or movie |
| Ichika4594 chapter 13 . 7/15 Can you do Gundam Build Divers Re Rise? |
| Theanimemaster9000 chapter 12 . 7/13 The bashing or James and Adam are getting old. You keep shitting on the male villains but most of the female cast is exempt. Has everyone forgotten the terrible shit Illia did? Or what about Yang? She is just shitty. |
| Alloy101 chapter 13 . 7/11 First rule of MR. Popo’s training! First rule of MR. POPO’s TRAINING! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/9 This was fun until like chapter 10, then you only started writing about really boring worlds. Like beauty and the beast for a fanfic read? Really? |
| Lonely Boy chapter 13 . 6/28 I feel really dumb for forgetting this in my last comment, but could you do one where Jaune meets his female counter part and falls in love with her. Like "To love Oneself" or "The Game Show of Jaune Arc's dating life" chapter 15? |
| Lonely Boy chapter 13 . 6/28 Nice chapter keep up the amazing work! Now I have no clue how you may feel about this, but I personally like the ship of Jaune Arc x Arturia Pendragon. Now I liked this ship since the day RWBY dropped and always feel like Arturia could be this mentor/lover to Jaune like she was for Shirou. Maybe some time in the future you could do an alternative universe where Arturia (Lancer or Ruler) is sent to Remant to help Jaune achieve his goals of being a hero like she did for Shirou. Now Arturia would have no relation to the Arc family and just met Jaune and found him cute along with Jaune thinking that Arturia is a very smoking hot babe. Hey maybe you can send Arturia Pendragon to meet the cast. But thats just a suggestion, its your story and your not obligated and hope I'm not being to pushy. Sorry if I take up your time. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/28 OK what I don't get is why choose the Live action version, wasn't it awful especially compared to the animated one. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/28 OK I know Adam is a prick, but with how much shit everyone was talking about him, was it any real surprise he kept snapping the way he did. Also the whole Mercury getting hit if he so much as sneeze is getting old. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/27 This chapter just showed the capacity of your stupid mind. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/27 This was unnecessarily long. Ever heard of cutting it into parts? The alternate version of the RWBY watching was just stupid. Also, some of the bits of your were just stupid. Honestly, read so much better. |
| Plasma Dragon 312 chapter 1 . 6/26 You should do the Avengers with Jaune as Iron Man. |
| LionComet chapter 13 . 6/22 Actually it's the Brothers grim that own Beauty and the beast Disney only re-imaged it... Now hold on and i will just log in to my vpn before posting this... I expect the rodent to come in here and beat me up in a few |
