Great chapter I’m curious to see how long you’ll make this be

that awkward moment when you meet your dad's ex

I'm really liking how the plot is coming together!

Kudos. God bless.
-Silver

interesting

Oh this chapter is beautiful

So many twists and turns. I like what you have done with the lore

a little short but good none the less

Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one

I cant wait for more! I LOVE THIS!

I love this story! Thanks for updating!

Really intriguing where this is going. Gonna be hard to put it down.

It’s rather amusing hearing dark magic described as the easy path given what we see of it in the show. Dark mages consume extremely rare ingredients, usually gathered in ridiculously obscure locations, speak enchantments backwards, and spend some of their own life force to fuel the spell. But it’s “a short cut,” or “the easy way out,” according to non users. As if! LOL.

Well, I've finally caught up with your story. Your ideas and portrayal in this story have been great to read. I'm curious where your,story will go next. What will happen to Callum and the others when the Skywing elves(?) find them. What about Ezran and Katolis? I look forward to finding out.

Wow. I'm really confused now. What's real and what's a nightmare? Is Aaravos telling the truth or is he losing his mind? I'll have to keep reading.

I've had some trouble reconciling the Aaravos in your story with the one in the series. They seemed so different. This chapter was terrifying, though! What's going on with Aaravos? He seemed to really care about Callum. Has that changed? What does the vision in mirror mean? and what is he doing to Callum?

I wondered what will Ezran do now to Viren? Not to mention, Aaravos.