Reviews for A Little Crowded
Akkiarn chapter 29 . 9/15
Did i just spend a day and a half binge reading all 29 chapters thus far? Yes... Yes I did.

I like this fanfic a lot and its an interesting twist. I'm glad Minato was the one that was voted the most. But during the Kakashi training period I was sorta hoping for a Kakashi romance too. Despite knowing that this is a MinatoxOC fic.

I was a little confused a few chapters ago on their "first kiss" like wtf lead to that? It was like something was missing that lead to it and it was just completely random out of the blue. I didn't expect the relationship to take off suddenly like that. Expecting it to take longer.

Overall I really like this story and and can't wait for the next update. And I'm inspired yet again to make my own OCxMinato Fanfic.
dustinpuffer chapter 20 . 8/14
This was where I dropped the stories last time I read it, the premise was incredible, and I understand that suffering bring out the best of your character but what you have going is just excessive.

And then m*therfking Danzo have to appear as well. For someone so incredibly smart, you made the OC made some incredibly dumb decision. Minato was of no help at all basically

This doesn't meant your story bad, it was genuinely interesting it just go in the direction I don't wanna see is all, your writing was incredible and I don't think I even spot any spelling mistakes. Few small grammar mistakes here and there.

I guess, thank you very much for sharing the story with us, and thank you for the update, it bring me back but errr I will just pretend she is killed here and canon proceed as normal.

P/s: I think this is just me personally pissed off because this is the second time I went through this and I cant state how much I hate Danzo
Lyrigami chapter 29 . 8/11
I loved the chapters I missed this fic a lot. Omg everything is so crazy :O
Maybe this guy is an otsutsuki or some sort of dimension traveler who had a lot of knowledge
Aelihn chapter 29 . 8/12
ooohhhh the plot thickens...
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 29 . 8/11
loved it! more please?!
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 27 . 7/25
Loved it! More please?!
AsbelLhant chapter 3 . 6/22
So Charlie has Red Hair. Kushina Red, Now I can't stop seing her as Kushina's Reincarnation.
SilentProwler chapter 27 . 6/16
Hmmm, I wonder. It would be interesting if she was an accidental byproduct of the...technique shown at the end. More specifically, maybe a byproduct of a trial version of the technique
Beleg chapter 27 . 5/22
I was not expecting Charlie to be so injured. I hope she will succeed to grow better even with her "impediement" as Danzo called it.
Besides, I am surprised to learn that she has Uzumaki blood. I wonder how is that possible ? Can't wait to find out !
As always, Minato is awesome ... especially during the ANBU "mental training" !
Beleg chapter 27 . 5/22
I must admit that I had forgotten about this story so I had to read everything again ... I fell in love with this story for the second time !
I am happy that you are still working on it because it is really original ! I hope to read more !

Thank you and I am looking forward to the next chapter !
xcandiedoll chapter 25 . 5/16
btw im also curious why you'd have to make her an Uzumaki? i cant help but think its gonna be like she is a reincarnation or sort of Kushina hmm?
xcandiedoll chapter 27 . 5/16
okayy that was a lot. excited for the continuation! please update hehe. im curious about the chuunin exams and how it would differ now! and ive thought youve already established Danzo as the one behind the abduction. so theres someone else huh? btw, im wondering if sasuke's got the cursed seal already?

more minato charlie please! so much tension uwu
xcandiedoll chapter 23 . 5/16
aacckkk my heart..! with that experiment! damn UWU
Minato is real smooth!
xcandiedoll chapter 22 . 5/15
i was having a hard time at the start. cant stand a hurting Minato. and then kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaomg omg kiss kiss fall in love
xcandiedoll chapter 18 . 5/15
okay.. so i loved this chapter omg! those two are really powerhouses. both conniving and manipulative too. being geniuses of their own is one thing but theyre still humans, they both also have a lot of issues, and its just adorable how they find solace with each other. the unspoken words and deep level understanding between them is a bit moving. i love that connection they have. youve set them up well. creative. it burns..
damn, what would i give to also have Minato's self proclaimed 'good hugs' ? makes me jelly of the MC lol

and that finagle joke was lit! damn, what would i also give to incur Minato's glare? hahaha
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