Reviews for The Spiderling
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 44 . 9/6
I swear I never get tired of the Deadpool craziness. To bad there isn’t much involving him. I guess it’s hard to at times or maybe it would be to much.

To bad this was the last chapter. I wonder how it could of gone on more then this. I can’t believe I remembered this story and didn’t have to start over after so long though.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 41 . 12/10/2019
Nice chapter. Funny how somethings ended up turning out here.

I always liked that peter calls Sam bucket head like he does. It always seemed a good fit for him with how he acts and things.

It’s odd with how many people go and look at Peter and how others are just clueless. He does seem to get girls out of his league though and he’s married to one now hehe.

I forgot there was an alien that was like the one in this chapter. Always a creepy and odd thing because of what it was.

That was an interesting omake you had here. I wonder what that might have for later on in the story other then a possible headache from them.

I’m looking forward to reading what you come up with for the next chapter. I wonder what you have in mind for things to play out and how everyone will end up dealing with it.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 40 . 12/4/2019
Cool chapter. I wasn’t expecting for this way to be how things ended up turning out but I like how things went.

I wonder what ended up crashing down where peter and Luna happen to be and what adventure might be in story for them.

I’m curious as to what you have in mind for the next chapter. I’m looking forward to reading how things might play out for everyone involved. I wonder who you might have show up next here.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 39 . 12/3/2019
Interesting how things are going.

It’s a bummer with how things seem to be going but it’s great to read about some characters that I like seeing around. I wonder how things will end up going.

I’m not sure what else to say so I’ll just say that I’m looking forward to reading what happens in the next chapter. I wonder how things will play out and what you have in mind for everyone involved in it.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 37 . 11/12/2019
Interesting chapter.

It’s odd how there is a symbiote problem again but things seem to be interesting with how it’s going. I wonder how everything will work out here.

I like how things are going and I’m looking forward to reading the next chapter when it gets posted. I wonder how things will play out for everyone involved and what you have in mind for how things will go.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 36 . 10/30/2019
Fun chapter here. I like how many things ended up going.

I’m surprised at how many Peter had to end up fighting because they wanted him to be with them. That was a bit of a headache there.

I’m surprised that Luna waited so long to get her wedding dress instead of sooner so it could of been more to her liking. At least she found the one she wanted.

It’s always fun seeing Deadpool around. I do feel bad for you and others when it comes to him since it has to be a bit of a pain to keep him in character.

I wonder if any of the single ladies will end up finding anyone at some point.

I like how things went in this chapter and I wonder what you have in mind for the next chapter. I look forward to reading the next chapter to see what you have in mind for things to play out for everyone involved.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 35 . 10/22/2019
Nice chapter but also sad as well. I feel sorry for aunt May. I feel bad for Teresa though since she wasn’t able to make it in time. I do wonder how Kaine took the news though.

I’m glad to see some things ended up turning out for the best for everyone and that they were able to be happy.

I can understand the concern about having something not made of clouds falling on them at some point. I would be as well.

I’m glad to see that everyone made it home and are settling into there new lives there.

I wonder how the next chapter will go and what you have in mind for everyone. I look forward to reading the next chapter and seeing how things end up tuning out for everyone.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 34 . 10/18/2019
And just when I thought the goblin couldn’t be grosser. If it’s part of canon I have no clue but that was just gross to imagine.

I like how the battle went in this chapter and how they were able to stop the goblin. Gross but effective.

It’s always fun when some hero’s go about things differently that tends to freak many others out just for things to turn out for the best. That was fun to read.

Seems like things got a bit more interesting and I wonder how the next chapter will go. I wonder what you have in mind for things to play out.

I feel I should get around to reading up on canon things but that’s just to much to read. I also don’t like how canon goes either so I have no clue.

I’m looking forward to reading the next chapter and seeing what you think of for everyone. The way this chapter left off seems like the next chapter might be interesting to read.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 33 . 10/17/2019
This was an interesting chapter. I’m still not sure how I feel of king pin of all people being the mayor. That’s just not right at all and I wonder if he’s good or still on the evil side. Makes my head hurt thinking about it.

I enjoyed how a lot of the battles happened and I’m glad to see things are turning out for the better compared to how I thought things could have when things started.

I’m not exactly sure what else to say so I’m just going to say I’m looking forward to reading the next chapter and seeing how things play out. I found this to be interesting on how things turned out so far.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 32 . 10/16/2019
Interesting chapter. I like how the Halloween part went and I like the costumes you had for each of them as well.

I wasn’t expecting what happened to Zecora but I do like how things seem to be going. That was a nice idea for her over all.

I still don’t fully get what’s to be expected but I have a bit of an idea where the maker is involved. It is interesting on how your going about things and I wonder what you have in mind.

I’m looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder how things will play out for everyone and what you have in kind for them. I look forward to reading what you come up with for the chapter.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 31 . 10/15/2019
I like how this chapter went and it was a great way for things to play out. Nicely done here.

I’m happy things worked out great for Kaine and that he’s back to normal again. Or should I say back to full power again? Whatever the correct way to say it is I’m glad he’s doing great and back to saving the day again. I hope he stops doubting things in his life like he has been though.

That sucks that they had a hard time dealing with the security systems like they did but at least they got everything felt with so hum drum could get what they needed for Kaine.

I still hate that maker creep but I am eager to read what you have in mind for things to play out in this story with him. I wonder how things are going to turn out in Equestria for everyone there after the past few chapters of the maker.

I wonder what you have planned for everyone. I’m looking forward to reading what you have in mind and seeing how things play out for everyone in the next chapter.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 30 . 10/10/2019
Nice chapter. Not how I was expecting things to go with that robot master person but I’m happy with how things turned out. That was good.

It’s sad that Kaine got infected like he did and that things look bad for him. I hope things work out for him and whatever peter has planned works. I wonder how that will go.

I don’t know what else to say other then I’m looking forward to reading the next chapter and seeing what you have in mind for everyone in it. I’m hoping things manage to work out for the best for Kaine and seeing what you have in kind for him.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 29 . 10/8/2019
Things went interestingly in this chapter.

I’m wondering when Rarity and Tony are going to end up dating. If there not already dating that is.

That was an interesting things with substitute fantastic four you did here. I like how you had things go and turn out in the end. That was nice.

I wonder how things are going to go in the next chapter from how this one was left off on. I’m sure it’s going to be interesting.

I look forward to the next chapter to read how things work out and what else you have in mind for everyone.

To bad I don’t know as much about Spider-Man like I once thought from long ago.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 28 . 10/7/2019
Interesting chapter. I like how many things went and wondering about many other things.

I like how things went for scarlet spider and the power ponies like it did. That was nice there and that everyone seems to be ok with the new changes and everything around all of them. Hard not to with the craziness that happens I guess.

Not was I was expecting peter/Spider-Man to do when he found out about his daughters first kiss but I like how you did that part.

I like how you had the venom being dealt with. That was unexpected to of seen but nicely done as well.

I’m glad younger May told adult May about her time in Equestria and they were able to bond more over that. Always a nice thing to read about.

I’m not completely sure on how I’m feeling about how things are going on the maker end of things but I am looking forward to seeing what you have planned here.

I look forward to reading the next chapter to see what you have in mind and how things will work out for everyone as things play out.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 27 . 10/4/2019
Nice chapter. I’m glad to see even Celestia ended up with a coltfriend as well so that was great to read. I’m also glad there’s a way for others to keep in touch with everything going on as well. That was nicely done.

I wonder if aunt May is ever going to learn about being able to get in touch with her old pony friend Celestia. That’s something I’ve actually been wondering about for a few chapters now.

I thought that part with May was cute and I was wondering when you might do something along those line. I like how you chose to do things there.

To bad there wasn’t any omake this time. I bet they can be hard to think of a lot of times.

I’m looking forward to reading the next chapter to see what you have in mind for those in it and reading how things work out for them.
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