Amazing story. I really hope you make a sequel!

I kinda wanna see Roman with a semblance that's really embarrassing for him

Don't call ice cream waifu a psychotic, sadistic woman with a flair for violence! Even if it is true.

Love this whole interaction,love to see Jaune shutting down Cinder. Find it strange that Neo doubted him but, this conversation wasn’t Jaune like more of The Virtuoso. Love to see the change in Jaune behavior throughout this story the change from Jaune to the infamous Virtuoso

Jaune x neo sounds like a wonderful idea not enough fanfiction of them together would love it and l like the personality of neo in this fanfic

This was a helluva story, and i enjoyed 99 percent of it. Then he and neo split, then she died. So now i don't like you anymore. But that doesnt matter...

You know, I'm always going on about how I want my ending like a cup of coffee - mostly dark with a lick of milk. But then I remember that I always drink cappuccinos with a lot of sugar and some cinnamon. Same with the story endings - I always end up going for the ones that are mostly sweet with a few hints of bitter. But there's always that one cup of pure dark coffee with a few drops of milk, always that one story with a dark ending with the slightest silver lining, that manages to be good enough that I the taste is the least of my cares about it. This is one of those coffee-like stories and endings. And it was superb.

Why kill Neo?

God i hope its jaune x neo. There are just so many opportunities

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Omoi: Oh no! Now Jaune is gonna go and save Ruby and probably take Roman along, then at some point in the fight Ruby - who's aura is depleted - gets shot and we lose our fav cookie monster! Then Jaune will become all angst and shit then join Cinder! Then he will have an huge part of the fall of Beacon and Pyrrha will die! Then Jaune will meet Salem and become one of her Lieutenants! Then once the Kingdoms are all destroyed Salem will use the Relics to- Gah!

IJ: Shut up already! *Blows off steam coming off of fist*

IJ the oblivious one

Ahh... the levels of denseness is up there with Naruto and Ichigo. Yep.

IJ the oblivious one

Plagued by the nightmares of bashing a man's skull in, Roman gives him advice. Later, caught on a date with Ren, how will it go from here? Will Jaune turn into a psychopath? Will he discover his love for men and accept Ren-chan's love? Will Neo enjoy the dinner he brings? Find out next time, on Criminally Good Z~

... what kinda review was that?

IJ the oblivious one

Yang is a siscon.

... shit

Yes please, Ice-cream Knight must happen (Devil Kings of DxD! That name sucked) I needs it!

IJ the oblivious one