"Condoms are for pussies"

Umm, no? They're for dicks. /s

Ho… mukatta kuruno ka? Nigetsu ni kono DIO ni chikazuite kuruno ka? Sekkaku sofu no Josefu ga watashi no Za Warudo no shotai wo. Shiken shuryu chaimu chokuzen made mondai yo toitte iru jukensee ne you na? Kisshi koita kibun de wo shietekure ta to yuu no ni?

this was cool but now it's not cool anymore. nemuri is a fucking asshole

Damn

Mi amigo, que genial te queda esto! Empezé a leer y te seguí hasta Naruto vs Orochimaru. Hasta ahí me pareció buenísimo, los desarrollos de los personajes y la intervención de Kurama con los eventos canon. Post snake, todo se fue al carajo, en el buen sentido, la dualidad Naruto y Kurama, los 11, la caída de Mirko (sufrí con ello, lo conmovedor y lo potencial de ella, la amo), AFO y el misterio del pasado. Ese seudo-harem con Momo, Rumi, las otras, Tokage, Toga. Una pregunta que me queda sería, si bien la última aparición de Kurama impacto muchísimo y traumo a la gente promedio. Nadie noto el parecido entre la actuación de Naruto con el bromista Kurama? Alguien más aparte de Rumi y los otros que ya lo saben... Cómo por qué, este chico, Naruto, es tan buen manipulador y obviamente experimentado luchador, cuando supuestamente hay testigos de que perdió contra un simple puñetazo de Ashido hace unas semanas?

here lies..

I started this yesterday and holy fucking shit. I thought this was a crack fick, and then you gave me plot, I thought it was gonna be all for one centric and you gave me orochimaru man this is a good ass fix, keep up the good work

Let naruto vs gentle fight for popularity

Oh shit. Big boi. Nice shit till now man

Can't wait for more

Why you dont ha e publicate A mes episode

In the end, you try to manipulate us into believing that we know what is going to happen, only for us to realize at the last minute that those nudges were a distraction from the real plan. But, in the end, you always end up staying true to canon. For example you symbolically break from canon with the over the top clues about the Kurama 11, only to subvert expectations with their deaths. But this only shows your adherence to canon even more. Because, despite the hints designed to make us think a certain way, you never SAID that those were Naruto characters. You never gave us names: in fact, you specifically avoided it. So their deaths, and other well timed things such as the statement that Naruto's existence is changing events, serve the purpose of making us look for the answers outside of canon, while in reality you have been following it the entire time. In your own way. Looking forward to the reappearance of Orochimaru, and the final pairing of Naruto with the girl whose love for him is selfless.

Ok. I just binged this. Gotta say I am REALLY impressed. These chapters all have some purpose which I gotta point out bc too many fanfics write for the sake of writing. Here, every chapter is stand alone and special. It keeps you wanting more. Its so addicting just to know whats Naruto gonna get himself into this time? The transition of Naruto characters into mha characters is so good. I could talk forever how amazing this is, but imma speculate instead bc having someone speculate about what you create is a super compliment, so. I’m just excited with what you have for Sasuke. In Naruto fashion, Sasuke has to be Naruto’s rival, and with Mirko stepping out of the mold, I wanna see how Sasuke fits. If you don’t have plans for that, I just wanna see what else you have in store. I also wanna see more of what Izuku is thinking and doing at this time. He is the mha mc and its kind of hilarious how well this story worked without ever touching the mha mess. Such a big aspect of this story hasn’t even been touched and I gotta love how much you added into the world to make it so independent to the mha storyline. The red light district was my favorite addition to the world and I cannot wait to see more world building. Seeing the ANBU as robots is gonna be something I can’t wait for. Danzo is easily the most hated character in the Naruto universe, so seeing him suffer by Naruto’s pranks is gonna be very therapeutic. Thanks for writing this. You could literally do anything with this story and I would eat it up. Feed me mooore! Have a great day.

I love the way you have woven naruto into this universe. Having the powers and abilities of the original but in a fun and different way.
I also like reading naruto stories where you get to see more then just “mob of clones” tactics. Showing his skill and intelligence is cool, and by changing the goal of the fights to be having fun you can show more power and skill without just flattening everyone instantly.
I’m really looking forward to reading more! This is one of the few stories I will go out of my way to see if it’s been updated. So if you could upload a few hundred thousand words this week that would be great! :P

Good story, but I really hope that Mirko gets with Naruto. After all she went through and all the banter I’m hoping they get together and she’s able to get back out. Other then that great story, keep it up!