Dear Ku Lon:

Yes. Yes, you are. Oh, said life had sinned for over 300 years.
Buckle up.

Thank you very much for reposting those great stories!

Probably because Greyff is a bitch

The dark phonenix trys to turn Naruto evil, it can't, Naruto is such a nice guy that even his dark side is a nice guy, that Naruto is just acting normal. Phonenix is frustrated rahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh- phonenix.

Where to begin...
- What is the plot of your story? you have too many things going on to even make heads or tails of it.
- Why do you have Danzo screaming murder and the Hokage not saying shit? it's something else entirely yet Danzo has no idea and you let him get away with shit?
- Why put him on Kakashi's team and bring up all these points of having him join Kurenai's would be better? Contradictory and useless.
- How can Jiraiya even think that a Seal would help when the REAP DEATH SEAL can't really contain the phoenix all that well?
- What is the point of this fic when a telepath with telekinesis would literally blow everyone and everything away except for Kaguya and juubi Madara?. You took something REALLY POWERFUL and NERFED it.

Who changed the display?

I know this review is basically useless, but I needed to share with someone the fact that I read this chapter name as "fire nipples", and now I cannot unsee the images my poor mind has just forced itself to imagine.

this was and is a great story shame the other is lost i shall look for it and if find it will pm you

Thanks for re-posting this. Greyff is a great author, I'm a big fan of his "Spiral Dragon." I hope he isn't feeling bad about his works. They might be a bit rough in places but they're not bad at all.

I can see the appeal, but this story never nails the tone. It's unfocused, going from plot point to plot point with a narrow thread of plot linking them. Your usual writing beats the shiitake mushrooms out of this fic.

The biggest flaw is that The Phoenix is portrayed as a mindless monster. No personality, no voice, not even it's obsessive focus on creation and destruction. It just exists to give Naruto super-awesome fire powers.

Kind of a shame that this is where the story ends. It feels really unfinished, even though it does wrap up what it starts, but leaves a very obvious sequel setup.

Hmm, nice story pity you can't find the other one sounds interesting anyways keep up the great work!

There were moments when I did not like the series, more than anything the elements of Ranma that were practically not used but were named, there were many crossover and references that I did not always understand. These last chapters were very good, funny, full of action.

Frequently when a fanfic author decides to go professional their agents and publishing companies request that they delete all of their amateur work from fantic sites

Great story