Reviews for Escape From Monster Girl Island
Majin Othinus chapter 1 . 7/4
Update please!
AMAZING EZ-8 chapter 4 . 4/20
nice story here, for insparation for monster girls i recomend monster girl encyclopedia's wiki, just google it and there is a ton of monster girls to chose from
MegaMechaSloth chapter 4 . 4/14
This is a great chapter.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/23
Please don't ruins this with lesbian shit.
Raltol Lotlar chapter 2 . 2/18
Things are going fast, chaotic, but enjoyable.
So Yang only had an inflammation, thing that at the end she all good. Its because it was never explained and maybe the "Ice" helped... Or she receive treatment in the Kingdom.
Raltol Lotlar chapter 1 . 2/18
Well, its funny but you brough many blanks that would cause this story to complicate and/or touch a lot of drama.
I hope it just stay like the name of that monster girl manga... just an "Every day life".
Guest chapter 4 . 2/16
Is there any consistancy for what technology/information that is available on the island?
BlueCore chapter 4 . 2/10
Please continue, this is an awesome story
Dased22 chapter 4 . 2/6
neat story so far my nigga
KorevainsoLightshire chapter 4 . 2/1
I'm mainly curious if Jaune could still potentially unlock his aura. I mean it was sort of hinted at with his first interaction with humanoid Blake after all. Also, did Jaune just go semi-super-sayian on them?
Benthino chapter 4 . 2/1
Hohohoho! I like what I have found! I look forward to more of this! You combine Monster Girls, Island Survival and RPG! Three of my favourites! I tip my hat and applaud you my friend! Know that I will most likely LOVE what the next chapter brings.
AL chapter 4 . 2/1
I was earlier going to write "Emerald has joined the Har... party." but it rather obvious that she will be around soon enough. ;)

Still not sure if I like this story due to how much you rely on Physical comedy and rather outlandishness of most generic Other-world Harem stories. But I cant say I dont like what is here. I only hope that in the future we get less introductions and more spent interacting with the main cast. One can only have so much drama before it get old.

Still not a bad story...yet. Hope you continue to find joy in what you write man, good luck.
lazylegionspark chapter 4 . 2/1
I am enjoying the story. Most of the characters work fine and consistent with what you are portraying. Was a little confused with the Ruby human black eye situation. She was always told human, meet Jaune, that story is humans not so bad, Jaune hit her, trust in humans broken, now Yang say she will get better by Jaune being him. How did she have such trust after and unwavering doubt until he hit her? Especially after being told her whole life.

Like the Blake bits, but careful about Flanderization. Curious to see her story go.

RPG lol.
Keep it up.
ZenithTempest chapter 4 . 1/31
Glad to see this was updated, though there are some plot problems here. If memory serves, the house they live in is in Elven territory, I find it odd the city cops were able to infiltrate and extract them all without the Elves interfering, much less having jurisdiction to begin with. There's also the matter of the genre seeming to switch halfway through this chapter, with them suddenly being 'Isekai'd' into a VRMMO survival game. I suppose in this kind of story it's not a big deal since it's not taking itself too seriously, but it did feel odd to me at least.
The only other critique I'd have, and this is less for this story and more if you make another Monster Girl-style harem story at some point, you'd want the Monster Girls to be of the 'desirable' type, since the whole point of the genre is 'attractive' Monster Girls a human could theoretically be with. You have that here with Blake as a (half) catgirl, Weiss as an elf, and Yang as a drakonid, but Ruby and Ren are basically a turtle and panda that walk on two legs and have a human head.
2010si chapter 4 . 1/31
Thx for the chapter , i love u history and u characters
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