Touche, my English teacher would be disappointed in me if she saw me now lol anywho J boy shouldve gotten some contacts to cover the eyes but eh

A nice relaxing chapter to break up all the crazy action, I approve. It was nice to see everyone’s reactions to Emperor Jaune, even if it is just he beginning.

This story universe you’ve built keeps getting better. keep up the good work

tokyo ghoul

Okay i really like the new look and this... i guess calm Jaune is now under kinda like he figured things out and had a personol revalation. i really enjoyed this chapter and im excited for more thank you for writing and have a nice day.

Oooook you lost me half way thru can you translate when you write in another language please? This chapter was supposed to be profound i guess but for me the way you write it its All over the place which i dont think is what you were going for

Oh shit boi, FUCKING CLIFFHANGER! I can't wait for the next chapter, I can imagine Jaune on a suit worthy of being a goddang Vampire(like Zeltrecht) with them golden eyes. I would love to see the reaction of his family and friends with his new eyes. heh.

Indeed, Jaune. If you want to protect them, you need to accept what you've become just like Vlad(from that movie, fucking love that crimson dragon armor).

Listening to this with Unravel(Tokyo Ghoul OP) playing is very appropriate with the theme and the scene at the end wherein Jaune realize that he became a Vampire. I guess this is the first step for Jaune to unravel his inner self and the world.

So Weiss is subtly confirm to be a vampire? as well as Blake or something.. BUT Woo!

Great! Magnificent chapter!

Man I'm really glad you decided to do this all at once instead of making it several chapters long, I really think it helps a lot with setting everything in motion instead of drawing it out and then making the big revelation. I love long stories but some times they're just so slow it seems like they're not going anywhere. It think this chapter was pretty solid and gave us a glimpse of what's coming in the future, so keep up the great work man and I hope we can see more soon.

Lol. He ded...

awwww pyrrha kid playing with jaune kid, thanks for the chapter and congratulations for the 700 followers
(Sorry for the bad english is not my lenguage, i use traslate google to read you fanfic)

So.. he basically regressed into a man child with great power?
His once oh so noble and great simple view broke just because of some ghost?
Welp can't argue with real life and fantasy fucking over your mental or some shit. Hopefully. Hopefully this gets better. But goddamn, I am never giving this shit up. I'll keep reading man. Its too good to pass up.

This was a bit of an info dump but I have to say that I loved every minute of it.
Then the bit where Jaune walks out of the morgue and is confronted by the soldiers...that sent chills down my spine.
Love what you're doing so far, keep it up!