Reviews for Departure from the Diary |
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CorruptedFlame chapter 1 . 7/27 Harry/fem TMR? Sign me right up! |
stevem1 chapter 16 . 7/21 This is a brilliant story. I really enjoy how their shared experiences are helping Lady Voldemort and Harry find common ground, and how sharing head/soul space is causing the boundaries between their personalities and magic to blur. If they manage to get her a body will their souls still be connected due to the mutual transfusion? If there is a grey area, it seems that a bit of each will still be in the other once a split occurs. Dumbledore does come across as a judgmental, holier than thou jerk in this story, but not evil. He’s bad at boundaries and doesn’t have much empathy for the concerns of others. Though I guess that could make him evil if you look at his actions and not his intent. |
frankiebayer2002 chapter 5 . 7/18 Please update soon this is great |
pwtcmcneil chapter 3 . 7/6 harry, you're a gryffindor not an idiot, don't swear on your life with a magically binding oath to not tell people about the spirit of Voldemort stuck in your head, that's dumb |
TheDragonPrince99 chapter 16 . 7/6 This story is so good I read up to chapter 16 in one night. I can't wait for the update. |
Guest chapter 16 . 7/5 Very interesting story, can't wait to see how will others react to a passenger in Harry's head, or how Tamelyn will react to Voldemort, please update soon. |
Cauti0n chapter 16 . 6/30 10/10 so far |
tcl7189 chapter 16 . 6/29 Wow.. Awesome ride so far... Can't wait to see what you got next :) |
Thiago-Gamer12 chapter 16 . 6/29 good fik. consider add new chapters :D I usin a translator, my english is baad :D |
Thrasher Blew chapter 16 . 6/27 I really like the story. Tam is a good character, and so is Harry. I have a hard time believing Tam would be in any way progressive though. Because when it comes to muggles her politics are pure realist. |
Omnipotent94 chapter 16 . 6/26 I loved this story and I really hope you don't abandon this. |
GreenRaven96 chapter 16 . 6/25 Quite the good story, I hope you continue it. |
noel.vermillion1231 chapter 16 . 6/25 So, get ready for some heartfelt yet hyperbolic praise. I have read Harry Potter fanfic for 12 years now. Obviously my tastes have changed—I’m not immature enough to think that Perfect Lionheart is anything other than a self-absorbed hack of a writer anymore—but I have become more able to recognize quality writing. I have read hundreds, maybe thousands of HP fanfics over the past decade plus. This one earned its way into my top ten almost effortlessly. This isn’t to say it’s a perfect fic. There’s errors, both structural and grammatical, and room for improvement in pacing especially. But the combination of character work, dialogue, and attention to/respect for the source material, while still leaving room for you to tell your own story, is exceptional. I ruined my sleep cycle to read this and enjoyed every second of it. Kudos to you for some seriously good writing. Keep up the good work. |
Helily chapter 16 . 6/22 (I find myself thinking now of a cute guinea pig Patronus. That would be hilarious. Surely someone has made it happen?) But about this chapter. I like the idea of an Unbreakable Vow explaining Remus’s nondisclosure of the Animagus forms of his sadistic friends. Still, I have always hated Remus so I hope we hardly see much more of him. Will be fine though if you decide to add more of him, because either way I love this fic and thank you very much for writing it. As well, I hope you are fine and healthy irl. Good luck and I can’t wait to read more if you are continuing this. Should probably check out your other fics now ️️️ |
Helily chapter 15 . 6/22 I too like the idea of Tam being able to cast a Patronus. Someone who loves magic that much deserves to. Plus, a Basilisk Patronus! Yes! Best thing I can think of besides a dragon or phoenix or cat. And one day Harry will also love Tessie hmph! :D (That Pottermore quiz said I would have a swan Patronus; so disappointing) (TT_TT) |