Reviews for Jaune Arc: The Fullmetal Huntsman (Hiatus) |
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PeriKitten chapter 9 . 7/3 Damn thats it huh the end of the story i thought this story was wonderful you did a great job making it from the characters to the plot it was really great. I tried to find other stories like this but it wasnt the same so this one was my favorite thanks anyway for the great story. |
DragonTetho chapter 6 . 7/3 My god, why did you make Jaune's EQ go even lower? Goddang, I would've known it if someone is interested and it was way TOO obvious holy shit even if I have only a brief experience dating someone. Now, I really know why I hate and love(a bit, only a tiny bit) dense characters like these. |
Dragon Blaze-X chapter 9 . 7/3 Well just rember you pass word and username man so you can always come back if the urge hits |
gwb620 chapter 9 . 7/3 While I’m disappointed that You are no longer writing I I understand. For what it’s worth I enjoyed this story. |
thegermankaiserreich chapter 9 . 7/3 The end of an age. I hope you someday get your mojo back. |
Gabriel443 chapter 8 . 10/28/2019 Excelent fic |
GunBlade2020 chapter 8 . 10/28/2019 Hi there Ouch, the cat fights continues... I wonder if you bring in homunculus in a flask, RWBY style... Keep up the great writing! |
gwb620 chapter 8 . 10/27/2019 Excellent chapter, looking forward to seeing what happens next! |
NinjaFang1331 chapter 8 . 10/27/2019 Nice work |
jtcookie96 chapter 7 . 10/11/2019 just a wild guess, but I assume that Salem wrote that book. possibly with the help of Ozpin. Chapter was really good and I LOVE how Alexander Armstrong is Jaunes dad in this. I bet he has plenty of techniques THAT HAVE BEEN PASSED DOWN THE ARMSTRONG FAMILY LINE FOR GENERATIONS! |
gwb620 chapter 7 . 10/6/2019 Excellent chapter! |
NinjaFang1331 chapter 7 . 10/5/2019 Excellent work |
Guest chapter 7 . 10/5/2019 I can't wait for the next update thanks for updating |
MEleeSmasher chapter 7 . 10/4/2019 Wonder who is making the first move for Jaune. So, Father is in play here? |
gwb620 chapter 5 . 9/3/2019 Just to put it out there but talons are on birds not boars. The word should be tusks. Also you repeated a sentence between Emerald and Jaune in the library. |