Reviews for Jaune Arc: The Fullmetal Huntsman (Hiatus)
PeriKitten chapter 9 . 7/3
Damn thats it huh the end of the story i thought this story was wonderful you did a great job making it from the characters to the plot it was really great. I tried to find other stories like this but it wasnt the same so this one was my favorite thanks anyway for the great story.
DragonTetho chapter 6 . 7/3
My god, why did you make Jaune's EQ go even lower? Goddang, I would've known it if someone is interested and it was way TOO obvious holy shit even if I have only a brief experience dating someone. Now, I really know why I hate and love(a bit, only a tiny bit) dense characters like these.
Dragon Blaze-X chapter 9 . 7/3
Well just rember you pass word and username man so you can always come back if the urge hits
gwb620 chapter 9 . 7/3
While I’m disappointed that You are no longer writing I I understand. For what it’s worth I enjoyed this story.
thegermankaiserreich chapter 9 . 7/3
The end of an age.
I hope you someday get your mojo back.
Gabriel443 chapter 8 . 10/28/2019
Excelent fic
GunBlade2020 chapter 8 . 10/28/2019
Hi there

Ouch, the cat fights continues...

I wonder if you bring in homunculus in a flask, RWBY style...

Keep up the great writing!
gwb620 chapter 8 . 10/27/2019
Excellent chapter, looking forward to seeing what happens next!
NinjaFang1331 chapter 8 . 10/27/2019
Nice work
jtcookie96 chapter 7 . 10/11/2019
just a wild guess, but I assume that Salem wrote that book. possibly with the help of Ozpin. Chapter was really good and I LOVE how Alexander Armstrong is Jaunes dad in this. I bet he has plenty of techniques THAT HAVE BEEN PASSED DOWN THE ARMSTRONG FAMILY LINE FOR GENERATIONS!
gwb620 chapter 7 . 10/6/2019
Excellent chapter!
NinjaFang1331 chapter 7 . 10/5/2019
Excellent work
Guest chapter 7 . 10/5/2019
I can't wait for the next update thanks for updating
MEleeSmasher chapter 7 . 10/4/2019
Wonder who is making the first move for Jaune.

So, Father is in play here?
gwb620 chapter 5 . 9/3/2019
Just to put it out there but talons are on birds not boars. The word should be tusks. Also you repeated a sentence between Emerald and Jaune in the library.
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