KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!

I HOPE RAPHTALIA GETS STRONGER!

keep up the amazing work!

I Hope Jaune can continue to help out Tanuki-Tan!

So the more he understands emotions as a grim the closest he he of a complete merge between his human and grim nature effectively becoming like Salem only better and stronger becouse he draws on positive emotions as well.

Poor Jaune...or not. His aura and semblance alongside the powers of shield hero makes for a fairly OP skillset, now if only he would escape from a certain redhaired bitch...who am I kidding she looks too much like Pyrrha for him to not trust her or maybe not?

We'll see.

I can believe that you are burned out. I sat down to read this in one go and found that the narrative just drifted. Did you have an ending in mind when you started this. Proper story outlining is essential or you can lose your motivation when the ideas dry up.

KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!

WHAT THE?! JAUNE IS SAVING RAPHTALIA!

AWESOMESAUCE!

so, no yandere Raphtalia?

The changes made to the original story are well done, and the writting is quite good. My only gripe would be that the Boarbatusk shield as well as Raphtalia are too much mysterious for their own good, and it gets confusing.

And since summoning was touched briefly, I'm sure that I'm not the only one who would like to see the rest of JNPR make an appereance, because let's be real, they alone are enough to boost Jaune's party beyond anything the other heroes can do. If as normal JNPR they would win, imagine with Jaune being the shield hero. Besides, while Raphtalia is a good figther, Pyhrra would tear the waves to shreads with her natural skill. And that's not even mentioning Nora.

I do hope that you get back to this story some time!

This was a good chapter.

I am very happy.

Please update, but take ur time.

So this story ngl kinda slaps. My biggest gripe with it would be the harem trope that it has. It would be awesome to have a solo pairing, but it won't stop me from reading it.

It has fine grammar, excellent flow, solid fights scenes, and a floofy tail,
4 ice cream cones and a chocolate chip cookie out of 10
Dw about the burnout :)
If worse comes to worst, just throw sorta related crap at the text wall, I promise I'll like it.

:D

Interesting story.
I must say the idea of Jaune being the protagonist of an Isekai is a exciting concept.

I look forward to read more of this fantastic story!

Dont worry about this. Thank you for giving us 16 great chapter.

Ehh, don't beat yourself up too much over it. The vast majority of fanfics—even the well-written ones—never get finished and there's really nothing wrong with that. This stuff's all in good fun. Sure, some people start writing one fanfic or another with some sort of personal challenge in mind but other than that, fanfiction isn't terribly serious:

If you're writing purely for fun? No shame in stopping once it stops being fun to write.

Out of ideas? No big deal. If you want to learn something from it, maybe plan a little better beforehand next time or try shifting to a more forgiving format. TV-Show style comes to mind: a series of related oneshots that show off some of the more interesting parts of what could've been a much longer story.

Stuck on one particular scene? Skip it! Just skim over it and move on to what you CAN write. While I'm rambling on, though, I would attach a condition to this one. "As long as you don't abuse it." I've read a few fanfics that had vast and constant timeskips past so much interesting-looking stuff that what the writer did bother to focus on was dull to read. This is different from TV-show style because in that one, it's on purpose and each section is meant to be satisfying on its own even though they only make sense in context of each other.

. . . Yeah, I didn't mean to write that much random advice out of nowhere. Point being, the story was fun along the way and unless you're failing to meet some specific goal—which isn't the impression I'm getting here—there's no need to feel bad about running out of ideas. If anyone's complaining about it, they're probably just bitching because bitching is, itself, fun.

take a break and try to come back later if needed. it's fine on burnouts and just put stories on hiatus until you recover.

You can always us readers for ideas y'know.

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