Reviews for Necromancer
HelpingHand chapter 14 . 7/19
I like the story and was wondering if you take ideas from readers or at least willing to read them? Because I had a few after reading your story, this story has really sparked my imagination so I going to say my ideas and you can ignore them if you want.

Jaune can have a baby King Taijitu wrapped around him and coils it around an arm then has it spring forward to do Scorpion’s “get over here” move from Mortal Kombat. Even if he doesn’t grab people Jaune can grab weapons or use it as a grapple hook or a whip.

Can he tell his summons to follow the orders of others if he tells them to. Jaune does need more practice with his powers so he could keep them out all the time. If he does let others command them I can see Nora riding an Ursa and Ruby riding a Beowolf in an arena fight. Like robot fights or a Pokemon battle. Grimm get smarter with age right so does his summons do too? Or smarter with each fight and because his summons can’t die they can keep learning.

Nora would have a shadow Ursa as a mount riding it everywhere. She would give it a name and love Miss bubbles. She would take care of it, scratching it under its chin, trying to feed it peanut butter, give it belly rubs and reading bedtime stories to it.

I want the group to come into Beacon on a Deathstalker, why walk when you can sit on a Deathstalker. Nora waves when seeing Oobleck and says “what’s up Doc”. He asks what they are doing and Nora says “taking the Deathstalker bus to the cafeteria of course, do you want a lift?”. Oobleck could always use more coffee so he hops on. Ozpin would smile and Glynda would facepalm at seeing this and with Port now on top proclaiming the creature should be called ‘Sir Pinch-a-lots’, he gets high fives from Nora and Yang.

If Jaune summoned the Grimm dragon and it spawned more Grimm would they count as his summons or would they count as their own entity with a level above their head and not taking his MP while still doing what he tells them?

Can he see through his summons eyes or can they tell him things? Like if they all are hunting Grimm can he send his Nevermore up to spot threats.

Do Jaune and Pyrrha have a free time slot together because he could get her to help him train. If he is training his Class then he needs to train his stats too. Maybe a lot of them can train and dual without Class powers just stats.

If Ruby makes Jaune armor and maybe weapons then can she make something that his summons can use? Jaune can keep it on his back and when he summons the right one he can give it to the summon. For example Jaune should at least have grenades that his Nevermore can carry and drop on enemies. Is Ruby going to make it so he can throw his buckler and have it come back to him.

I feel like Jaune’s mom would stop talking to his sisters until they talk to Jaune like they would each other, basically she would treat them like they do him. If words wouldn’t convince them to change then maybe a lack of them will. She wouldn’t accept apologies said to her, she would only want action towards Jaune.

Is Weiss dumb? If Jaune is an incompetent person then he wouldn’t be a threat so why can’t he attend Beacon or is Jaune a dangerous person, if he is why would you treat him lower than you and antagonize him. It seems like Weiss is going out of her way to make an enemy, does she want to look over her shoulder all the time. Or does she want to wake up and have a Beowolf in her room … actually can Jaune do that. Can he spawn summons on the other side of a door or wall. Can summons turn in to smoke so an attack goes through them and the summon appears on the other side of the attacker.

I’m looking forward to the next chapter whenever it is, keep up the good work.
LordMentat chapter 15 . 6/23
Cant wait for this to come back. It is quite good.
SplitsShot chapter 14 . 6/13
Seriously speaking this is pretty good story. Jaune's fighting style is similar to V(DMC 5). Hope to see your next chapter soon
Raj8 chapter 15 . 6/7
I personally think updating Bi Weekly would be nicer as it would mean that we are continuing to get new content, but if you are to busy it's completely understandable to take a break.
kaiokenkaizer chapter 6 . 6/6
This is an interesting story, but I would have preferred more information about the leveling system as ell as tiers in the earlier chapters. It causes unnecessary confusion to the reader when you leave things up to their interpretation.
Guest chapter 15 . 6/1
August 22
246vili chapter 15 . 6/1
It does not matter if I have to wait longer for an update. I preffer quality.

So if you need to, take your time.
tsun chapter 14 . 5/29
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nice story but not my cup of coffee. don't like jaune the pussy. when I fast read chapter 1 and thought of solo leveling, i thought it would be awesome but man, not aqesome at all. still good characters and story but not a fan of this type of protag. they are as annoying as op chara going farmlands for no good reasons of doesn't want to stand out.
tsun chapter 1 . 5/29
solo leveling? his not using his ability? is he stupid? nope, not requiring and answer. his a fool.
Guest chapter 15 . 5/27
bi-weekly's prob better
Buildingcross chapter 15 . 5/28
Love your story and would love more chapters but stress yourself out.
Swoogan chapter 15 . 5/25
Either, doesn't matter to me, with bi-weekly we get updates a bit sooner and get to enjoy this wonderful story and you'd have something to do as a break from whatever your doing. However, with the wait we would get more fleshed out chapters and story, plus you would get your stuff done at the pace you need to without something else being in place already.

So with those thoughts in mind its honestly up to you, as this is your story and its your life, I shall except whatever you choose
H chapter 15 . 5/25
I'd like whatever is easier on you mentally, as long as you don't abandon the story waiting a few weeks is okay.
Guest chapter 15 . 5/25
Wait until August 22. You need to ficus all of your time on school at the moment without worrying about another deadline.
Guest chapter 15 . 5/24
Dealers choice
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