That was truly magnificent story. Subarashii

Lovely story, albeit how he got there was a bit confusing.

I was searching for something to read when i found this story again, I already read it and realised I haven’t favourited and commented yet so here i am

Switched over to ao3 to read this when it was noted the lemons were missing and there were nuggets of insight to the thoughts and actions so I'm glad I did.

Initially I read this with the expectation of maybe a fluff turn good the evil, happy ending etc. A mix of the confusing starting chapter and then the interactions slowly disillusioned me that this was not that fic. A definitive more realistic world that can only be described by fate and the counter force are a bitch.

I'm still slightly confused on the ending though and how it came to be, how is arturia (and is that shirous or the one he fought with (but considering the warmth and closeness I'm assuming it's the former)) out of Avalon? They seemed to have got an eternal happy ever after if shirous chaldean dialogue is anything to go by...but how?

Anyways it was a different outlook without a crazy reason, thanks for the read.

Awesome

Basically it becomes a Lostbelt or Singularity for this matters.
Well done you Merlin assh*le, you basically rewrote history and ruined Artoria for all matters for your stupid vision.

You know what Shirou.
Ditched Saber and just be with Morgan and Mordred FOREVER!

Papa? Wait what?!

Now I know the story is completed and all. But I just wanna say this, just in case you didn't know, but Fate's Lancelot had Purple hair, not black!

Short! Not a lot of details where I wanted them but pretty funny. Archer Mordred is something I want in-game now.

Decent but could use more details and some actual tension instead of the sorta melancholy march towards the inevitable you've got going. Intro could also use a little cleaning up to.

Oh boy. Waver Velvet

What the fck Archer?

I want to challenge you to write a story about This Shirou summoned in a Grail War or Chaldea

Oh Boy