Reviews for My Sister's Keeper
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16
Great story, update please!
Destiny chapter 2 . 8/5
Even though I slightly redent making Weiss bitchier than in the show, I admit, she somehow seems even cuter for it... in part due to Jaune calling out her shortness. She's an adorable angry pixie
Destiny chapter 2 . 8/5
Uh... just curious; why do you keep misspelling Yang's name? It's Xiao Long, not Xio Long. Xiao means small in mandarin.
Destiny chapter 1 . 8/5
I hope he ends up with Weiss. I'm a sucker for White Knight. I just really like Weiss as a developing character
Zentari2238 chapter 8 . 7/3
Horseshit drama, at that.
Zentari2238 chapter 7 . 7/3
Cheap, worthless drama.
Ceoko chapter 9 . 6/18
Loving this fic, read all in a day, I enjoyed it greatly! Hope you keep writing!
TheSlySage chapter 4 . 6/6
while I get and approve(not that my approval matters lol) that you aren't listing the pairing...

I want it to be Blake. I want her to be a mom figure to Jade sooooo bad. it would be so adorable, because JUS CUZ.

also Weiss is a great option too well any of them are plausable heck ANY girl is possible. heck could be Emerald for all we know... could have a super soft spot for Jaune because he took in an orphan girl... obviously something Emerald would have dreamed of in her early years on the streets.

but then again I just look forward to what is to come. so thanks for writing!
TheSlySage chapter 3 . 6/6
so far, I love this.

also completely different voicing compared to some of your other works!

great improvement to the flow of events and dialog!
Mengsk chapter 9 . 6/1
Weiss probably has more to gain as a person, training a young Faunus. I'm sure Jaune could still use Pyrrha as a mentor personally.
Combine117 chapter 9 . 5/31
That ending is just perfect XD.

I will await the next chapter, where I will see how everything will be going.

And yes, Oz ROAST the FUCK out of that bastard's dad!
Devilmaycry17 chapter 9 . 5/31
Dude finally. Took too long man
PredatorPuck chapter 1 . 5/31
wow thanks for teaching me Isabella's lullaby, it's a good song loved it! And I can just imagine Jaune taking care of a little girl no matter how hard it is (specially with whole racism) and him growing stronger and more mature just for her. can't wait to read more
GunBlade2020 chapter 9 . 5/31
Hi there

This chapter probably hits a lot of emotional aspects of life, good job there.

Anyway, keep up the great writing and stay safe!
merendinoemiliano chapter 9 . 5/31
Nice introspection and dialogues
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