Reviews for Heir of Darkness
memefarius chapter 6 . 4/1
Will there be teen rebel phase ?
pedro nyt chapter 6 . 12/8/2019
i wonder if mercury is going to show up, what with jaune looking to be more than capable of filling that role. looking forward to the next update.
CallMeCayde chapter 1 . 12/7/2019
Wait his blonde and can manipulate time... HE CAN USE ZA WARUDO!
CallMeCayde chapter 1 . 12/7/2019
Wait his blonde and can manipulate time... HE CAN USE ZA WARUDO!
Guest55 chapter 5 . 8/16/2019
Find it funny she said something about arrogant. She’s the most arrogant person in the series. Hope Jaune becomes strong enough to knock HER down a peg.
RedDemonEye chapter 6 . 8/13/2019
This chapter was interesting we got introduced to a lot of characters and are boys very first mission I'm do proud of him his growing into such a badass but someone has to teach him that overconfidence is a slow and insidious killer words I hope he takes to heart anyway with that said keep up the good work and like always have a nice day.
Mr ChubbySnorlax619 chapter 6 . 8/6/2019
Another good chapter, can't wait for more.
Arsinis chapter 6 . 8/4/2019
So, this is pretty interesting story. I like some of AU elements, although some of them are very strange... Why WF members didn't ask why they working with humans? Cinder is already a Maiden here? It's weird how Jaune's real combat experience and his first real mission are connected to WF pit and WF rescue mission for some reasons. I would think there're a better and more logical options and scenarios for this things.
Roland's Blade chapter 6 . 8/4/2019
Question: Will Jaune be a bad guy or good? And is the ship Arkos?
Arsinis chapter 4 . 8/4/2019
Why some people call Ruby redhead? She isn't redhead, she has black hair with red tips, she mostly brunette.
Hellhoundz6 chapter 6 . 8/3/2019
Damn this story gets better and better can wait to see jaune pull something dark and god help emerald is she tries to mess with Jaunes servant friend
X3runner chapter 6 . 8/3/2019
Is jaune ever going to develop his semblance to the point of working like za warudo ? Or is it going to develop more like Kiritsugu’s Double Accel? Also I’m kinda hoping jaune becomes kinda bugged by emerald not responding the way he would like and makes it his mission to crack her I mean in cannon he is a sucker for off putting standoffish women and who better than emerald, but it’s nice to see emerald still can get flusters from the mini male cinder known as jaune. Would be cool to see emerald develop into s bit of a tsundere. On the Blake thing I got to say nice touch.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2019
Dumb
Crim chapter 5 . 7/28/2019
5'4" at age 7/8?

That's a bit ridiculous, don't you think?
X3runner chapter 5 . 7/29/2019
Damn is jaune going to crush on emerald or is he just noting she’s pretty. Is emerald going to go full clingy in both of those who have the fall last name. Also the fight reminded me of kiritsugu grim fate we’ll done.
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