Happy 1 year anniversary for the fic!

As always, awesome story!

Not your best story, but still a pretty good one. It went downhill from Leviathan onward, but that's because I wanted to see more small-scale stuff with the clinic instead of boring, pointless escalation and fighting.

Very unique, very distinct, and very good story! Your stories are always more... "dark?" than I usually read and enjoy, but you make them world appropriate and they are still page turners. Very imaginative and well done! Looking forward to going on to the next stories as you write them.

Your stories always satisfy. Some are better than others but I have still enjoyed them all. This latest was amazing. The characters were engaging and the story very well written. Thank you.

I really love this story

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Do a sequel about the war

Well goddam. Not many worm fanfics ever get to the scion fight. Congrats! I really liked the novel direction it went off in. Immediately abandoning Brockton Bay led to several characters and arcs that were a pleasure to read.

is it odd that the last arc seemed rushed? like a few more arcs could be fitted before it?

I finally got around to finishing this, and it's been awhile since I read the earlier parts, but what "healing" was Yuki referencing that allowed her and Eden to merge? Otherwise, I thought this was a very... succinct end to the story, which I have mixed feelings about. On one hand, it feels almost rushed to conclusion, but on the other, it wasn't a drawn out slog like canon and some other Scion fights. Credit where credit is due, though: you finished a fic that ended in a Scion fight. You stand among the few who have accomplished such a feat in the fandom. Congratulations.

Other thoughts: I imagine Yuki will be in for a surprise when Force Ghost Taylor sticks around long after her body is dust. I also like how you dealt with Taylor's sexuality. I think the reason we see a lot of F/F pairings in Worm is because all the "interesting" characters Taylor interacts with and has a relationship with are women. Usually, authors just go AU and make Taylor gay. I don't think I've ever seen a straight Taylor paired with another woman held together by the glue of trauma, though. So kudos there. I'm also more excited about mundane parahuman politics and conflict that you've set up for the sequel than I was for the end-of-the-world threats.

Overall, this was one of the better AU stories I've read, certainly one of the top 5 in the fandom. Excellent job!

My heart feels like a twisted pretzel. So many different emotions. I was kinda hoping Yuki would work out.

Well done! Powerful chapter

I just fell even deeper in love with the character of Assault

Wow, rescuing a damsel in distress ends up leaving you with a distressed damsel? Who'd of thunk' it?
Seriously, I've been in relationships with 'damaged' women (abusive childhoods, horrible exes, etc). Some of those women end of being incredibly strong, wise, and compassionate. But others end up with serious issues and freak out about anything that even vaguely relates to past trauma.
Yuki's behaviors and social maladjustment are all too accurate.