Man, just had to read the entire fanfic all over again because it is that good. I am dying of anticipation for the next chapter.

Holy cow that was the fastest 160k words I’ve ever read. I’m amazed at how Callum’s only 11 this far into the story- yet I can’t think of a single chapter that wasn’t well paced. Not to mention this is the best I’ve ever seen these characters written. I won’t delude myself into thinking this story will be finished, but I do think I’ll always check on this story whenever I hear about a new season or the series in general after it ends. Thank you :)

Please, for the love of all that is holy! Please update this very fascinating tale! I am losing my mind over not knowing what is happening next! Please! I beg you!

I enjoy that your following multiple storylines like Rayla’s and Harrow’s as well, it’s makes the world feel bigger and more real. The world building you have done especially with the primal sources and the ocean give a depth and meaning to the world which make it easy ti cate about the events and people actions. I greatly enjoy the story and can’t wait to see where you take it!

First of all I hope you won't get sick and be okay and happy.

Second oh my god. How I love the story. It was fascinating and very fun and enjoying but also times it is very dark. But I still love it. Hahahaha. Please. Please update soon.

Finally please be ok this story won't be the same without you.

Great chapter hope your staying safe and are able to upload the next chapter soon love the story

Great chapter im glad you tried to give soren a bit of his own pov there and i agree that part in season 2 was great it really helped show his moral character and how much he cares about the 2 princes and is only possibly trumped by season 3 *slight spoiler* when he stands up to his dad at the end when he is creating his army

Gotta say im glad im not the only one who agrees that claudia is a daddy's girl to the extreme and if her father says his ass smells like cupcakes and happiness that she would believe it and try to smell along with how she is on a road to self destruction with how quick she is to resort to killing and dark magic

Glad im not the only one who is terrified of the ocean though i dont hate it im absolutely terrified of it and think its a horrific nightmare but at the same time it does have a terrifying and mysterious beauty to it

Love the lovecraftian reference with the description of the ocean though even without the lovecraft the ocean is a horrific place though that may just be personal bias with having Thalassophobia

I love this!

Stop ripping off Dishonored.

That was a very nice Cthulhu reference.

Nekolvr11 greatly approves

You put in a Solas quote, I’m positively giddy. Also i missed the sponge bob refer in a previous chapter apparently. I was just expecting Avatar reference so this has been a real treat!

ooh! I love kat1017's idea of Callum being related to Aaravos on his mother's side.