just thinking you could bring summer back the same way as sig and Joan just a thought can't wait for the next chapter

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Can you update this ASAP?

Oh boy, I think that Millicas is dancing on a active minefield plus posters of warnings of what will happen if he steps on just one. Especially when he makes the daughter cry.

It's been a while since I read the other chapters, but if you are including Karma from the Nasu-verse, are you gonna, or willing to, include Emiya? In any form?

Honestly i could see Sienna entering into Karna's pride if he takes one of the sets or entering into Ruby's as a pawn. Beautiful chapter and I'm greatly looking forward to the next one like always~

3 chapters in and if first half of the first chapter was quite promosing, later on its stereotypical Mery Sue. Good executed Mery Sues are fun to read especially if they have interesting characterizations. When author said that he is going to ooc Ruby I expected him to make her more interesting, not less. Ddraig'd training quite a weak reason for Ruby to make literally 180 in her personality. This Ruby is ridiculously standard edgy MS, nothing more nothing less.

Just to clarify tho - OP / Mery Sue. OP might be overpowered and can crash entire mountain with one hit but will, for example, have perception 1 or be socially awkward as hell. MS just perfect in everything.

Tl;dr good idea, meh execution.

Continuing on from my last post in my humble opinion you should make that half vampire Valerie one of the pawns mostly because I think that it would ironic that Ruby was able to get the current holder of the DXD version of the holy grail and it would give her a reason to visit Rias and her crew that doesn’t completely break her neutrality just bends it of course that visit only happens after Valerie finds out that her boyfriend is part of Rias group of course.

Now which god class women is in front of Ruby that apparently looks exactly like Arthora and holds governess over a aspect of reality in such a way that it gets her dander up, that’s my question to you sir?!

I never understood the chess comparisons for ranking. If your going for a true comparison the king is simultaneously the weakest and strongest piece with no freedom while the pawn could be considered to have the most power outside of maybe the queen.

So happy we get to see our charity Boi! It’s been to long! And happy to see this story isn’t dead!

I dont know about you, but I kinda would like to see Tai as a Pawn, you could have Cinder or Glynda as a bishop, They both are able to attack from unseen angles. and given their respective skills in combat, you could have Cinders glass manipulation be a "mockery" of Sword Birth. another option is Emerald, supporting the pride by helping to mask their movements on the battlefield

i love it so much! it's very nice to see sienna got another biggest chance to show her self in the story. so, i can't wait to see another chapter.

and who is the god that ruby talk about?

don't make me waiting new update to long!

Add Sienna Khan and neo

Hey, when you finish "the sin's of return", you can start "Silver Goddess of Camelot", because I think it's a very good story.