Reviews for Genetic Composite
Luine Mercury LWG chapter 9 . 7/11
I actually caught the Thrawn bit. Not as familiar with with DC and GoT lore, so those slipped right by me.
Wheel0fDawn chapter 23 . 5/26
This was a great story! I hope you make more! those two have to raise a child after all
Wheel0fDawn chapter 8 . 5/26
Ahhhh I want lil dak to see his parents alreadyw; maybe entrapta will be able to make a parent child connection
MopSink chapter 4 . 12/6/2019
That interaction between Catra and Hordak was very in character. It felt like reading an episode of the series.
MopSink chapter 3 . 11/25/2019
Glimmers feelings are very real.
MopSink chapter 2 . 11/25/2019
Scorpia is the godmother.
MopSink chapter 1 . 11/25/2019
This is super cute. I just love accidental children.
lmsy92 chapter 23 . 11/23/2019
* to create them*
NamineNasha chapter 23 . 11/23/2019
He doesn't remember the dream! I knew he would probably forget most of it, after all its hard to remember dreams and I bet even harder to remember them when you have them in death. So I knew it would happen but at least he remember enough to know he saw Hode. Ah, dear Hode I bet he would have a field day with Dak. I wonder if Dak would have saw him as a Grandpa opposed to Brother as Hordak saw him, I was so getting daddy vibe from Hode (good daddy vibes, not sexual).

Ah, DAK, poor little darling Dak, they think they're spare parts now, I hope everything will work out for them in the end and they get to have a weird little family unit with Entrapta and Hordak. With Bow and Scorpia acting as extend family...oh, if Dak offically made Bow their Uncle would Bow bring them to see his dads! Oh, I wanna see that now. (It would be fun to see Dak learning about extended family but before getting the full picture they crafts it as Aunts and Uncles are people they perceive as family oppose to blood relation) By the way I love Hordak's reaction, I just couldn't see it in my mind so you did a wonderful job bringing it to life! So I guess in the next fic we'll be seeing how Entrapta will work out the deal. It seems like both cruel (which isn't very Adora and especially Bow like) and unproductive if they had Entrapta stay in Brightmoon to build things, so I'm thinking its going to be like a business trip type deal. Will Dak come with her occasionally?

I'll be reading the next fic right after reviewing! I also so have my fingers crossed for Dak's happy ending, I really want the little fella to get their happy ending. Come on happy family, they be the weirdest family ever but who are we kidding the weird families are usually the more endearing ones!

Side note, I kind of want to know what would happen (if it will happen) what Hordak will do if Dak calls him father. It would be so cute to see Dak calling them mother and father! With Scorpia conveniently near by ready to let the world know how endearing the scene will be!

Thank you for this wonderful story, you did a fantastic job! Now off to pester you in the next fic with the wonderful Dak and hopefully the amazing Hode!
lmsy92 chapter 23 . 11/23/2019
This was the longest, best Entrapdak fanfic I've ever read! I honestly thought Hordak would pass out from seeing a mini version himself and the fact that Entrapta used her own DNA to create him. Looking forward to reading the next new adventure! I love it!
galahsrock chapter 23 . 11/22/2019
You seem to have reuploaded chapter 11 instead of chapter 23
DarthMaine chapter 23 . 11/22/2019
could you make an update chapter for when the next fic in the series comes out?
chilled monkey chapter 21 . 11/21/2019
So... Has anyone told Micah what happened to his wife?

Good advice from Bow, Scorpia and Imp. Under-age drinking is very bad.

Skeletor!
OMAC001 chapter 22 . 11/21/2019
Well, Entrapta really shows a lot of herself this chapter.
Alaksandra chapter 22 . 11/20/2019
Tense, but awesome.
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