Kinda hard to understand something when no details are given. That said, I do respect your decision and hope all is well mentally, emotionally and physically.

Yes, more. Let them see the ‘True’ Darkness of Humanity. They can’t even fathom the Darkness possesses.
Show them, what have been going behind their back.
Make them Despair, Hopelessness, Hate, Disgust, Rejection, let them go through it all. Develop them! Make them better! They need to be better! They have 18 Years (actually maybe less than that), they need to develop in power, skill and most of all mentality. Once they did it know anything and when they started to gain knowledge, the truth of the hidden darkness, Salem, they could;it accept it, they could;it carry the burden. But now it has to be different, they can’t always do that or look away, they need develop. If they don’t want to then the situation should force them to develop, it isn’t something they have control over.
There is so much to do. They have so much to do. Create a new identity, have to get rid of their names for a new one soon, need funds, need to build up completely new connections, need to train, need to learn and so much more. As I said, so much to do.
I understand your the way you’re taking romance, but for now it could be used actively. I mean, I honestly love Jaune x Weiss. It is my all time fav RWBY ship/couple. I would have loved it if you took Sun x Blake route but it seems hard for now, I don’t know which route you’re taking with Blake. Tbh, I’m fine with Jaune x Weiss x Blake.

Thx for the chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.
PSJust a friendly reminder, avoid the usual mistakes people made in time-traveling fic.

First off, this was a good read - Well done.
Thank you for you gratitude, I’m always willing and happy to help whenever I can.

Now, the review:

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Primarily, this chapter suffered from the near constant changing of locations between Blake, Weiss and Jaune - also including past-future Ruby and Jaune. As a result of this, each scene appeared shorter with not much truly happening within them.
I’d say that the Blake segment where the better of the three scenarios, with the ones including Weiss and Jaune being the worst - mostly due to nothing really memorable happened within them.

If you’re going to continue with the word count of around six thousands, I’d recommend that you keep the transitions to around three. At this point that would include one with Blake, one with Weiss and Jaune, and one set within the past future.

On a similar vain, it might be nice to have some interactions with those that accompanied Blake within the arena and Blake herself (well, the two which survived anyways). I could see the breathiest snippets of characteristics being shown within the chapter and I wouldn’t say no to seeing them being explored a bit more.

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I must admit, at times, I may have overthought a few things that you included within the story.

The song that the Scarred man was singing, for instance, about three kinds of people. A part of me instantly thought that it could be in reference to Weiss, Jaune and Blake - that there could be something there... But then I came to the conclusion that it’s more than likely just a coincidence. As a result I didn’t put any further thought into it.

Also, I don’t know why it didn’t come to my attention before, but Tyrian would probably really like the Ntah and how they operate - they really fit rather well with his character, What with their misconstrued godly worship and manic murdering. Honestly, when I was reading the Blake sections, I kinda expected him to just appear randomly at some point.

It would be completely possible for him to be in Vacuo during this point in time. He was a Remnant-wide serial kill after all. I personally doubt that he’d be affiliated with Salem at this point in time though. Probably him doing his own thing.

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I believe that is all that stuck throughout my read.
Hopefully what I’ve mentioned is helpful. If you wish, we can go into further detail and discussions of the chapter and what occurred through our usual way of communication.

Love it
Hope to read more

This pretty much is a spin off on coeur's relic of the future but a (what if) with two others, I'll give this story a shot.

Never really pay much attention to ratings, so i don't have anything to say in that.
Still very intrigued with this idea.

In all honesty, a T rating would work. If you’re planning on adding elements of heavy gore or sexual themes however, I’d say stick with a M rating.

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Overall the chapter was presented quite well.

There were a few points were I thought you might be foreshadowing some in relation to the White Fang, but there wasn’t enough evidence to truly support any possible connections - be them though specific people or influences. Though, I feel like I’ve seen the situation at the end of the chapter before - in another story; I just can’t remember what it was.

But, besides that, it was another great chapter. Good job.

So something similar to Raven's "farming arena" in "Forged Destiny". Who exactly do they worship? I look forward to the next chapter.

Liking the cult thing that's happening.

I'm glad you're updating again. In regards to your AN, I'd recommend making that decision yourself based on where you're taking this story, not leaving it up to the readers. You can have them kill people left and right without needing an M rating, it's just not going to be very gory, which didn't seem to be the point of this story anyways. So unless you were planning on having lemons/pairings, which wouldn't be unheard of for these three to get together out of loneliness if nothing else, I'd probably just keep it where it is.
As for the chapter itself, I'm curious why Jaune didn't kill the kidnappers? I'm sure you could provide a narrative reason but it just felt like mercy for those who didn't deserve it. Also, while I don't know where this cult arc is going, I would recommend that you make sure it serves the goal of the overall story as it was originally laid out. Often times writers take a story thread off in one direction so far that the original story is lost over time. That's not to say you're doing that here, but the Ntah do seem very random.

This was a good chapter. As for the M rating, I don't think it's necessary as of now. I'm also interested in their more long term plans.

Nice start hope ya keep going

I like this story so far. Got a lot of feeling put into it.

Eyes do not close in death, they stare.

Slightly bothered by Blake’s interest in Sun “creepy stalker” Wukong. Whose conversation with Blake at the cafe began with her questioning why he followed her and why he had squatted in her hotel room for several days. Then his body language when she poured her heart out screamed “I couldn’t care less, this is ridiculous, ugh, yeah-sure-whatever.” Then the rest of his stalking (like the dorm window stuff and going to Menagerie).

There’s no reason for her to care that he died any more than if some random stranger was killed.

“Never again” says Blake. Like she did the last time. And the time before that. That word, “never”; I do not think that word means what she thinks it means.

This is actually very interesting, and better than what i came in expecting, i hope to see more from this.
Thank you for sharing.

Buen capitulo, supongo que está organización será eliminada por Blake y Weiss ya que Jaune está fuera. Aunque con. Sus reservas podría levantarse rápidamente. Espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo.