Reviews for Fire Emblem: Two Professors
Rean-Bell chapter 18 . 5/22
Byleth really is having a hard time with magic it wouldn't be surprising if his twin managed to use reason magic before him but it would be beneficial for the both of them as Balaiya can help him maintain and use magic along with the other students, it would do him good without all the lectures that Hannamen gave so far. He could use faith magic too just to help with the healing just in case.
It was good to see a family moment with the Eisner family, what were their thoughts on the entire exchange with their late mother and who's the lucky girl for Byleth? ;)
Balaiya definitely misses Claude being around and all the Golden Deers might be feeling the same way, Sylvain will notice their and Balaiya's behavior regarding Claude. I know he'll feel outmatch.
CielCial chapter 18 . 5/22
It's nice to see Byleth with his Blue Lions especially when tagged team with Hannamen and the Black Eagles. It was certainly entertaining to see how they teamed up routing the bandits and thieves on their mission. It looks like the Blue Lions and Golden Deers will be together again for the next mission it wouldn't be surprising to see the Black Eagles joining in too. It seems most of the students are interested in what Claude does especially Edelgard. They can say he's training and studying and exercising but Edelgard and a few others will be more watchful if they see him.
Byleth may get to use Sothis' power's soon like Balaiya and his mind won't have to keep going to deja vu and will know the scene is familiar like with his sister, it'd be worth to see how Byleth will do this.
RoseGold25 chapter 18 . 5/22
And so the plot thickens...I've been wondering what Byleth's powers would be and I feel we're just at the beginning of answers and what's in store for the twins. I'm kinda theorising if they'll be some sibling rivalry/disputes. (eh, author? wanna spill some secrets ;p) I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Guest chapter 18 . 5/15
Postin on anon to avoid hate spam. Its a shame ur story is being bombarded by spam accounts. These ppl all say the same shite but use different words. Bet its the same person over and over. Smh.

In other news, good story. Can't wait to see what is next.
Krystal501 chapter 18 . 5/14
Both Byleth and Balaiya have the potential to use both reason and faith magic. If Balaiya can use faith magic she can also use reason magic and she'll be able to help her brother out in containing a simple fire spell. Also because their mother Sitri must have been a spellcaster too. Byleth may not go to Manuela for help but did he ever thought of asking Dorothea or Lysithea? Lysithea may specialize in dark reason magic but she's also able to use faith and reason magic. Dorothea would be the better teacher for Byleth right now so it could help him learn the basics from her for now. And Byleth's crest had just awaken so it should help him cast spells. He might also have Sothis' divine pulse ability if it'll help him and his sister.
Jeralt must have known that Sitri can use magic but was he aware that his children also possessed the same magical ability as his wife did?
Osheana259 chapter 18 . 5/14
It looks like Byleth with have to get some of the other magic users and have them teach him magic. I know both of them can use both faith and reason magic, but it looks like he's struggling.
That was certainly an interesting introduction to Sitri, although I'm not sure how both of the twin siblings feel about her, yet. It'll come later when Jeralt starts to talk more about her :)

If you were to do a backstory of both Jeralt and Sitri while she's pregnant with both Byleth and Balaiya, how would you write it? Sitri might comment on Jeralt being an overprotective father, an overprotective papa bear, towards their children, especially if one of them is a girl. She would even ask when the right guy will come for Balaiya and Jeralt might say when she starts to smile like Sitri did for him.
Balaiya already has her partner, who will be Byleth's?
Rahzel and Ryu chapter 18 . 5/13
It's good you're doing OK :)

It really shows how much Claude's absence is affecting Balaiya whenever she thinks of him. The same thing must have been felt for Sitri in the past whenever Jeralt was away on missions but he always did comes back with a present for her, which is a nice gift :)
I like how Jeralt introduce Byleth and Balaiya to their mother, maybe in a few months they will come to love her as much as their father. Still hilarious that Jeralt is the overprotective papa bear and no one will ever forget it.

By the way, sorry if we pressured you into having the Blue Lions team up with the Golden Deers again, but it's logical to have friends back up their friend even though he changed classes and with the amount of chaos happening in the Kingdom, Balaiya and her "Deers" including Sylvain need more help than ever given the circumstances and Byleth is just learning how to use his crest. Both of them need to stay sharp and focus for what's coming up soon.
NyanCat chapter 18 . 5/13
Aww~ :'( Bala misses Claude, she would feel down from his absences but when he comes back she'll be happy again! And we finally have Sitri yaaay~! There needs to be more Jeralt/Sitri time!
It'd be funny to see how her brother and father will react when they see the 2 together even though Jeralt expresses how he felt about guys wanting to marry Bala XD
Who's the lucky lady to be paired with Byleth? I have 1 eye for a lady for him to go with and her name starts with an "S" ;)

Oh Manuela, not surprise she drank an entire bottle of wine but still funny!
Both Blue Lions and Black Eagles, a grumpy Hubert, Dorothea and Ingrid teased both Ashe and Caspar like they're siblings, and the big surprise was Byleth's crest activating.

I'm happy to hear from you again, I hope you're doing well out there and stay healthy MEOW~:3
KittyKat-Belle chapter 18 . 5/12
It's good to see you doing well and with another long written chapter, stay safe out there :)
There's so much to say and so many questions in my mind after reading this. For now, I will just stick to what I have to say for this chapter.

Balaiya really misses Claude, it showed when she was with Byleth and Jeralt. How will they both react when Claude returns and Balaiya starts to brighten up again? I'm guessing Jeralt will see the signs and the similarities when he was with Sitri and he'll tell right away that the Golden Deer leader does make her happy and smile. Although when Byleth told Jeralt that there were low rank knights wanting to propose to his sister, it was no surprise the father would fight off anyone who would dare approach his daughter, and the next thing you know Byleth will follow in his footsteps and be as aggressive as the Blade Breaker! LOL
Who will Byleth give the ring to? I can think of a few people I'm hoping he will pair up with but I would like to hear your pairs with him. And who else you will be paired off? It'd be interesting if Claude saw that ring that Jeralt has and requested a jeweller to replicate the ring with different gemstones in there.
I do wonder how Byleth and Balaiya feel about their mother. Will they ask more about her with Jeralt on their free time? I get the feeling that if they knew more about her, they would come to see her as much of a parent as Jeralt and feel a deep connection with her.

It was very interesting to see both the Blue Lions and the Black Eagles working together like this. I get the feeling (this is just a hunch though) that there's going to be more bonding with them and the other Golden Deers. It'll be more intriguing to see their bonds with the professors and the knights too. Byleth did a great job leading the students of 2 houses and surprisingly his crest activating as well. Will Byleth be able to use Sothis' powers someday?

What did Cyril wanted to tell Balaiya? Does Byleth know he's Almyran? If he did discover Cyril is Almyran, would he also put 2 and 2 together and figure out Claude is also one too, confronting both him and his sister?

There is 1 thing I've been thinking about for a long while when I read this. When the Eisners first return to Garreg Mach and took on Jeralt's advice on keeping their guard up around Rhea I was surprise that they didn't catch on right away that the Archbishop treats them a bit differently than the others, mostly Balaiya, and that neither have caught on her expectations on them like they were the key to something very important, especially when they were given the sword of the creator. They should be suspicious of her motives and quietly observe her mood and actions, more so throughout the entire story. They shouldn't trust her so willingly, especially when 1 of them is taking faith magic lessons from her.
They should also take in Tomas the librarian, Sothis would tell the player that there's something suspicious about him so they would need to keep their guard up around him too.
NobodysAngel38 chapter 17 . 4/27
I absolutely adore your story! I am so glad I found this hidden gem when scrolling through fanfic. The amount of details and writing of this is clearly well written and giving more depth to the story of the game. The gradual separation of the twins was superb as well seeing their personalities growing into their own person and how they both interact in the world. What I love most is how you stay true to the lore but also try to add realism when you add your spins or retelling of the story. No one is perfect, the gritty reality of a military school and remembering these are adolescents being taught how to kill. You definitely did not shy away from this tone and I am here for it! Sorry for so long but I cannot wait for the next chapter to hopefully come out soon and in the mean time will indulge myself of reading it again just to make sure I didn't miss anything crucial. Keep up the brilliant work and hope you are safe during this lockdown(hopefully you writing this story is helping you during this time as well:) tc!
Krystal501 chapter 17 . 3/25
So that's why Balaiya had blood on her, thank you for the clarification. Claude trying to interrogate the answers from her is understandable but he knows by now she tells him everything, maybe time apart will help clear his head and think on her words. He also will think about Shai and forgot to ask someone to look after her. Balaiya will have to tell him she took her in when he gets back. She also needs to finish the book Manuela lent to her.

It must have been a surprise for Byleth when his sister decided to go first with Hannamen's DNA research. I was actually surprise that Byleth and the Blue Lions won't go with the Golden Deers on the mission, it also affects them too. Sylvain may be in the Golden Deer house but he's always a member of the Blue Lion house. Maybe Sylvain can ask Rhea to get the Blue Lions to go with them, he knows his friends want to help him and there are going to be a lot of thieves there. Is Sothis able to go to Byleth without his sister's help? Or will it take a bit more time before it happens?
CielCial chapter 17 . 3/25
Balaiya should watch what she says around Sylvain and the same with him or he could get hurt again. Down Sylvain, don't go raising flags again even when Claude is away for an Alliance conference meeting. The others will learn what happened to their house leader and this might have Lorenz throw a bit of a fit on why he couldn't go instead, too bad for him, get the girls to shut him down for thinking like that and be mad at him for not just the fit but also for the mentions in his and Balaiya's support xD

It was good that Balaiya remembered to give the vial to Edelgard, the Imperial princess should let her know if it worked.
She could tell Byleth and he could request 1 from Claude just to give to Dimitri for his dreamless sleep.
Byleth should get more pov time with some of the other students like him with the other Blue Lions and the other 2 houses. It was still worth to see him and Jeralt get squished by Manuela xD
Osheana259 chapter 17 . 3/23
It's great to see you again. I think I better read the other stories you have out too but first things first, this one :)

It was nice of Balaiya to throw a tea party for Manuela and have her family join in too.

Sitri will be introduce right? Maybe Balaiya and Byleth will have a deep connection with her when Jeralt talks about her and presents a bouquet of her favorite flowers to her grave that could also happen to be Balaiya's favorite too, that would be nice to see :)

Claude could also give Balaiya the same flowers Jeralt gave to Sitri when he gets back and know those were her favorite when she smiles happily with Byleth and Jeralt looking from afar and from there they can see Claude looking genuinely happy to see her smile. It'd be like a flash back of Jeralt seeing himself and Sitri there. Still can't believe he'll be gone for almost a month, I'd give it half a month at most but we'll see.

Byleth questions if Claude really is going to take the relic sword from his sister and then a memory over Claude questioning himself if he can use the sword or not comes by and then Byleth concludes that Claude wouldn't do such a thing in the end when he and his sister talks about the said boy a bit more. What will the Golden Deers and the other 2 houses say when they learn of his absence to Alliance territory?
ReanBell chapter 17 . 3/22
I thought all 3 houses were going, just so they can see and learn about the transformation of how the demonic beats came to be when people wield the hero's relics without a crest on them, and because there's a lot of them both in the main story and in the paralogue. Is there nothing to change your mind?
Manuela's birthday will be unforgettable for her, especially with the Eisners being their for her. Since Manuela and Mercedes invited Balaiya to choir, Dorothea and Hilda should join in too. If Balaiya sings, her voice should be like from the opening song of 3 Houses, Jeralt and Byleth could hear her too and it could have Jeralt see she inherited her mother's singing voice too and see Sitri in her, that's be interesting to see for sure. Will Byleth be using reason and faith magic soon? I know both of them can use faith and reason magic.
NyanCat chapter 17 . 3/21
Long time no see~! :D So much to do and now there's time to read YAY~! And I fell in love with the Ashen Wolves too, I'm glad you're adding them in, when will they appear?

Claude really is going to be gone for almost an entire month?! I thought it would be for a few days or a week, she'll have to tell the others about him being gone for something important. Give them a week to miss their house leader, saying it's not the same without his presence lol
Maybe Hilda could take Claude's place besides Bala for the time being, the closest person to Claude was Hilda so it could be like a girl's hangout for them both, even talk about Claude himself and Hilda somewhat finding out Bala likes him and that she'll play matchmaker for the 2 ;)
It's good that Bala is going to take in Shai while Claude's away in the Alliance. Now she just needs to find another kitten like Shai so they would be each other's company :3

Bala really to watch her words around Sylvain, inviting him like that could lead the wrong way, the same for him too if he doesn't want Jeralt and Byleth on his tail again.
I was so sure the Blue Lions would also be going, Byleth needs more screen time with them :(
Is there no way of them to join? Couldn't Byleth and the Blue Lions have a mission before the Golden Deers and then meet up with them just as backup reinforcements? Sylvain may be part of the Golden Deers but he'll always be part of the Blue Lions and the Kingdom. There should be some moments with them and Sylvain next chapter

LOL Manuela plus birthday tea party with the Eisners equals Manuela smothering the males with her chest while crying XD
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