Reviews for A twist of fate
Golden Zero16 chapter 1 . 4/20
Interesting idea. My vote if not all would definitely be Claude
opalander chapter 1 . 1/24
I think people don't realize this isn't a Goku vs Fire Emblem debate, it's a fanfic. It's a really interesting premise nonetheless and I really hope this gets updated eventually. As for which house, I think Goku works better as a professor, after all if they know how powerful he is, they'll probably want him to teach the students rather than take classes.
TegamiBachi25 chapter 1 . 12/30/2019
Unfortunately, I would have to agree with the other reviewers and commentators here. Goku is undoubtedly more powerful than the entire fire emblem universe at this age. Goku at this time could solo the entire FE universe. Maybe except grima and degenerated dragons as they are considered powerful enough destroy countries, but goku took an axe to the head, bullets to the head, had his heart stopped by king piccolo, and still survived when normal wounds such as that would be considered completely fatal to the FE universe characters. Not to mention Goku's biology and his Saiyan blood, he is far more durable than any other human. This may sound rude and it may sound like I'm dissuading you from continuing this, but Goku is more powerful. This is a fact, considering he surpassed master roshi, whos full power completely obliterated the moon with a Kamehameha, and he would get no challenge from being in FE. The premise just doesn't work because Goku is that overpowered.

It's exactly why dragon ball and Fire Emblem do not mix, because dragon ball characters already had the capability to destroy the moon while Fire Emblem's only greatest feats were decimated countries by entities such as grima.
The Toad Soldier chapter 1 . 10/17/2019
Man, this fanfic is very ambitious and I love it! I really loved how you wrote out a glimpse of the house leaders’ reactions to Goku coming back like Byleth. Though, does this mean that Goku will replace Byleth? Or will Goku be alongside Byleth? Ignoring the obvious strength disparity between Goku and the Three Houses cast, this looks very interesting. I wonder how you will remedy that gap.
Dontus -not Donut- Powerus chapter 1 . 10/3/2019
"There was a massive light, and his eyes took a second to readjust, but what *he saw* was… something that shocked him.

It was him, a clearly older version of him, hugging a woman who had platinum white hair, and a regal red dress that seemed made for battle in a strange way

"I thought… I lost you, Goku…"

He *didn't see* her, as the voice was obviously a female, speak, yet he undoubtedly heard it."

And he saw how she looked...
JensenDaniels32 chapter 1 . 9/25/2019
Funny thing is, that even with a power level of a lot less than 500, Goku's still more powerful than everything in the Fire Emblem series. XD
Daddy Ducky chapter 1 . 9/5/2019
This looks promising I'm really interested to see where this is going please update soon
Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2019
This is so great please keep going!
ShonenSlayer777 chapter 1 . 8/27/2019
Loved it! There were a few typos, but other than that, pretty good.

I've always been fond of the idea that Goku killed 16 when he attacked the Red Ribbon Army, it's something that, in my opinion, should have been canon.

Since Goku is living alone, I'm guessing he isn't married to Chi-Chi in this story. I hope so, as I absolutely despise Chi-Chi. Useless harpy doesn't deserve Goku.

Also curious if Byleth is in this story, and will it be male or female Byleth?

Can't wait for the next chapter.
KingJGamer chapter 1 . 8/24/2019
He will pick no house, none of them can keep up with Goku
Ssb3Goku chapter 1 . 8/24/2019
This is a pretty interesting idea, I'm currently playing the game myself as well and loving it. Though I'm curious about a one things.

One is the strength difference between goku and pretty much everyone else, this is the character afterall who took an axe to the head has a kid and the axe shattered without any real training, among other feats that make him extremely strong when compared to the entire cast essentially. Will Dr. Gero send other androids after the teen in Fodlan, how will the world react to these titans duking it out and literally destroying landscape in there fights? I hope you don't need the character (which many tend to do so goku doesn't just steamroll everything.) But I understand why they do it.

I also hope Goku and Raphael become friends in this, the monastery's kitchen won't survive these two gluttons stepping into the dining hall, haha! Keep up the good work!
linkthetoaoftime chapter 1 . 8/23/2019
This is a very interesting concept, and I very much like how it is being executed. As for the path I think Goku should take... I would personally like to see him join up with the Blue Lions or Golden Deer.

The reasons for the Blue Lions being that I think their generally chivalric nature would mesh well with Goku. I also think that as a group they would probably take the most to whatever training Goku will give them.

The reasons for the Golden Deer is that Claude's shrewd nature makes a good complement to Goku's earnest, straight-forward nature.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2019
All I can say is hope edelgard will be changed a bit thanks to goku I have seen all paths and hope that el gets help needed from goku not for war but for life itself as it where can't wait to see goku with the other students and of course byleth hope goku can unite the 3 houses and discover those who slither in the dark faster than the others will look out for this one
Hotshot6 chapter 1 . 8/22/2019
I have a thought in my head, if you decide to make a path where the three houses are joined together to beat the two conflicting conspiracies, make it so that both of the manipulating organizations, in trying to get an advantage over the other by taking over the countries,while making sure the heirs are out of the way with a plot where the future leaders are on top of the most wanted list, along with with Goku and - if they become apart of the story - Byleth.

Fyi, i hope Byleth's a girl, mostly because i want to see Edelgard be conflicted and confused by her feelings for two really dense characters, with Byleth mostly be confused because she never experienced romantic feelings before, especially for two people at once. But mostly so i can see Jeralt be a papa wolf and scare the HFLL out of Edelgard and give Goku the one emotion he hasn't felt until that time. Pure, unadulterated fear and nervousness at the same time.
Player089 chapter 1 . 8/21/2019
Will Byleth also be in this story? Or will Goku be Replacing him?
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